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Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback

Name of student Wikipedia User: M.Caban
Date of review 4/25/2013
Name of editor Wikipedia User: SRampersaud
URL of editor’s Userpage Sandbox pre-edit URL http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SRampersaud/Interview
Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page 4/25/2013
Date review submitted to instructor 4/25/2013
Length of edit (too long/too short) Good length
Image (needed/appropriate) No image is needed
Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit) The information provided was accurate from the text book
Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed N/A
Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych) The article information was relevant to I/O Psych and was accurate from the textbook.
Wikiformatting Bullets were appropriate
Grammar & composition None
Other comments If it can be found, adding a external link would be beneficial




Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback

Name of student reviewer: Aisha Hamid

Date of review: 4/25/13

Date of review:04/25/13

Name of Editor: S.Rampersaud

URL of editor’s Userpage: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SRampersaud/Interview

Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page:04/25/13

Date review submitted to instructor: 04/25/13

Length of edit (too long/too short): Length of edit exceeds requirement.

Image (needed/appropriate): No image in edit. Image would have been appropriate.

Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit): Information is accurate, from the textbook.

Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed: N/A

Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych)-N/A

Wikiformatting: Formatting is good. Bullet points enhance the text.

Grammar & composition: Grammar and composition is accurate, no errors.

Other comments: Well done!

(Aisha Hamid (talk) 23:51, 25 April 2013 (UTC))[reply]


Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback

Name of student reviewer: Aaleksanian

Date of review: 4/13/13

Date of review:04/17/13

Name of Editor: S.Rampersaud

URL of editor’s Userpage: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SRampersaud/Interview

Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page:04/17/13

Date review submitted to instructor: 04/17/13

Length of edit (too long/too short): Exceeds the requirement

Image (needed/appropriate): Picture might be available to find

Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit): Accurate to textbook information

Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed: N/A

Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych)-N/A

Wikiformatting: Fine formatting

Grammar & composition: Proper construction of edit material

Other comments: Well done job. Heading might be too bright for the main article.


Aaleksanian (talk) 15:10, 17 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]


Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback

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Name of student reviewer: F.Moshammad

Date of review 4/15/13

Date of review:04/24/13

Name of Editor: SRampersaud

URL of editor’s Userpage: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SRampersaud

Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page:04/15/13

Date review submitted to instructor: 04/24/13

Length of edit (too long/too short): The length of edit exceeds the requirement

Image (needed/appropriate): an image would be a good addition to this edit.

Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit): Accurate to textbook information

Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed: N/A

Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych)-N/A

Wikiformatting: The formatting is very good

Grammar & composition: Proper construction of edit

Other comments: Good job!

F.Moshammad (talk) 01:07, 25 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]


Pre-Edit Peer Review Feedback

Name of student reviewer:Hmehta0120

Date of review 4/24/2013

Name of editor: S. Rampersaud

URL of editor’s Userpage http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SRampersaud/Interview

Date review posted on editor’s sandbox’s talk page: 4/24/2013

Date review submitted to instructor: 4/24/2013

Length of edit (too long/too short): The length of the edit is excellent. You have provided enough information without overpowering the readers.

Image (needed/appropriate):N/A (See comments, in comment box)

Review of textbook information (accuracy of info in edit):You have provided accurate information from the textbook, along with citing it.

Article is empirical, primary & peer-reviewed N/A

Review of article information (accuracy, I/O Psych): N/A

Wikiformatting: Excellent formatting, used bullet points, and italics the examples you have discussed (I would say make them bold as well, just an option will make them stand out more and more creative points)

Grammar & composition: Did Not find any errors. Their a flow to the reading well put together

Other comments: As stated earlier if you make the examples bold would look great. Also if you could find images or an image to show interviewer judgment it will add more charter to the page and more creative point. Other than that looks great. Good Luck

Hmehta0120 (talk) 04:00, 25 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]