User talk:SII&CT Alex

This is my talk page! Please talk to me!

Hi! I am Deneille and I'm talking to you! Deneille Rochelle (talk) 00:05, 11 February 2014 (UTC)

A barnstar for you!

	The Barnstar of Diligence
	Looks like you're getting a hang of editing! Keep up the good work! Deneille Rochelle (talk) 00:07, 11 February 2014 (UTC)

Hi! Thank you very much for the BarnStar! It is much appreciated.--SII&CT Alex (talk) 18:21, 13 February 2014 (UTC)

A page you started (Network Sovereignty) has been reviewed!

Thanks for creating Network Sovereignty, SII&CT Alex!

Wikipedia editor NHCLS just reviewed your page, and wrote this note for you:

Hello. Could you please review the page in order to make the style of writing more encyclopedic? Thanks!

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Hi NHCLS. I am working on it! Could you be more specific in what you mean by writing more in the style of the encyclopedia? I appreciate the feedback SII&CT Alex (talk) 20:22, 27 February 2014 (UTC)

Hello! When I commented that the apge was written like a review, I meant that the page, in my opinion, looks more like an essay or an newspaper article than an encyclopedic descritption. Take, for instance, the section on Implications for State Security:

Networks are challenging places for states to extend their sovereign control. In her book Sociology in the Age of the Internet Allison Cavanagh argues that state sovereignty has been drastically decreased by networks. [2] Other scholars such as Saskia Sassen agree. Sassen argues that that the state's power is limited in cyberspace and that networks, particularly the numerous private tunnels for institutions such as banks.[3] Sassen further postulates that these private tunnels create tensions within the state because the state itself is not one voice. [4] Essentially that the various interests in a network are echoed within the state, i.e. by lobbying groups.

I hope you see what I mean... Thanks! NHCLS (talk) 18:14, 28 February 2014 (UTC)