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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:38, 5 March 2018 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of Ethics Officer

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Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. This is a notice to inform you that a tag has been placed on Ethics Officer requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section A3 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because it is an article with no content whatsoever, or whose contents consist only of external links, a "See also" section, book references, category tags, template tags, interwiki links, images, a rephrasing of the title, a question that should have been asked at the help or reference desks, or an attempt to contact the subject of the article. Please see Wikipedia:Stub for our minimum information standards for short articles. Also please note that articles must be on notable subjects and should provide references to reliable sources that verify their content.

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Regards, SshibumXZ (Talk) (Contributions). 14:43, 5 April 2018 (UTC)

• I saw that this was deleted - when trying to move work live, make sure that you're moving a complete article. I also looked at your draft and I had some notes:

1. The draft is written in more of an essay style. Avoid words like "we", "I", and "you". You also want to avoid adding opinions and original research, which are claims and research that you came up on your own, based on source material that doesn't explicitly make these claims. With opinions in specific, you should only include ones that were made by authorities in reliable sources and of these, they should all be attributed within the article. (IE, according to John Smith..."
2. The lead needs to re-tooled to fit Wikipedia's style guidelines for lead paragraphs. These should read like "Ethics officers are ...." and should not start with a quote. In general quotes should not be in the lead, as leads should be a brief overview of the most important aspects of the topic.
3. The article needs more sourcing to help back up the claims and also show where the topic is notable. I'm not as worried about notability since this is something that should have a lot of sourcing out there, but you definitely want to avoid relying too much on a single source as it doesn't show a depth of coverage.
4. Finally, header titles should be more direct and to the point, such as "Background" or "history".

I hope that this helps! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:34, 6 April 2018 (UTC)

Chief Ethical Officer

== Chief Ethics Officers