User talk:Roquendo1
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[edit]Hello, Roquendo1, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:46, 9 February 2017 (UTC)
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[edit]Hi! I think that your additions to the introduction were great. It definitely provides a lot more information than the original intro. There may possibly be a few grammatical errors, so I would reread it. For example, like possibly rewording the last line "Anyone as old as one-hundred years old could be eligible, and anyone younger." I would also fact check this line or maybe cite the source because there were other age eligibility requirements. Other than that you could possibly add about the significance of the study and what a cardiovascular study pertains to or is. I like how you talked about why the head scientists chose Evans County and it would be cool to add to that part. Emilyoday (talk) 05:02, 26 April 2017 (UTC)