User talk:Rebecka fleetwood smith

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Lauren Bowker (May 2)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Music1201 was:

Please see the Manual of Style first. After formatting errors are fixed, this article will be up to standards.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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— Music1201 ^talk 21:41, 2 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Rebecka fleetwood smith, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! — Music1201 ^talk 21:41, 2 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Lauren Bowker (May 4)

{{subst:Afc decline|full=Draft:Lauren Bowker|cv=no|reason=reason|details=Please explain how the subject can be an award-winning alchemist, when alchemy has been considered [[WP:Pseudoscience|pseudoscience] for somewhat more than two hundred years. The citation that is given doesn't clarify anything.|comment=|sig=yes}}

I was referring to alchemist as a profession as it is what Bowker calls her practice. However I have now deleted the sentence and changed it to be about Lauren Bowker a designer and scientist.

AfC notification: Draft:Lauren Bowker has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Lauren Bowker. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 17:03, 8 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Lauren Bowker has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Lauren Bowker. Thanks! Peter Sam Fan 13:38, 12 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Lauren Bowker (May 13)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This is overly promotional. I checked references in the first part of the article, and many exaggerate what is in the sources. "Talks" become "keynotes". No mention is made of visits to 10 Downing street of meetings with Icelandic royals. She does "attend" or "appear" but she is "showcased." This has to be greatly toned down and must adhere to the facts in the sources.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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LaMona (talk) 01:53, 13 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Lauren Bowker (June 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DrStrauss was:

References need re-formatting, please see WP:REFB.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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DrStrauss talk 12:59, 28 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]