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16:03, 28 April 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Democratising Manchester (April 30)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by JBW were:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The cited references do not come remotely near to establishing that the topic satisfies Wikipedia's notability standards. Most if not all of the references suffer from one or more of the following defects: not an independent source (e.g. the campaign's own Twitter account); does not mention the subject at all, either as "Nancy Out Campaign" or as "Democratising Manchester"; mentions the subject, but does not give it substantial coverage. In addition to that, the draft is certainly not written from a neutral point of view, and looks very much like an attempt to promote its subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Democratising Manchester and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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JBW (talk) 22:06, 30 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Democratising Manchester has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Democratising Manchester. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 09:56, 3 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Democratising Manchester

Hello, RB2345. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Democratising Manchester, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 10:04, 3 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]