User talk:NickHelfand
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[edit]Hello, NickHelfand, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:51, 20 September 2018 (UTC)
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[edit]Per the assignment you should have some added primary sources such as images or text from codices, particularly because there are no images with color on the page. The visual description of her and her various forms as well as her accoutrements are very well done however there is a lack of information about her and what she does. Additionally the entire article shouldn't be one lead, try to add other sections. Additionally, there need to be more links to wikipedia articles for anyone who is not familiar with aztec mythology. Despite some lack of detail, the article is in much better shape now so good job!
Mcmdude (talk) 06:39, 8 October 2018 (UTC)
Is there a link you can add to Middle Culture or be more specific about what time that is specifically? Can you make a section called Description to include the part starting at “Her appearance…” and ending after the bullet points? I think your article would greatly benefit from more images as well! I would first try wikimedia commons or looking up codices within wikimedia commons to try to find unlabeled images that are still her. Overall, easy to understand and good references to other deities she is associated with Brittany N. Clarke (talk) 00:21, 9 October 2018 (UTC)