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Help me!

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im trying to write a new article and it has been deleted for 2 times now althoughi changed it a lot the second time.can someone please tell me whats wrong with it?i dont seem to understand thanks :) here it is :

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ArabOnlineGames (AOG) is an online game publisher for Arab speaking community. AOG publishes a variety of online games.

AOG games target a broad range of online games that most interests Arabia[1].

AOG offers games under different categories: Action, Adventure, Sports, Racing, Girls, and Strategy.
Currently [1] is offering 14 games on its Sign-Sign-On portal:
Title Genre Awards
Pirate storm War & Strategy -
Goodgame Empire War & Strategy Entrepreneur of the Year 2011

Best European Browser Game
the “BÄM! Award” in 2012
Best Strategy Browser MMO

Farmerama variety Best Online Game at the Mashable Awards at CES

Best Browsergame at the Deutscher Entwicklerpreis 2010
“Best European Browser Game” at the European Games Award 2010
prestigious LARA Game Award

Damoria War & Strategy -
Imperia War & Strategy -
Khanwars War & Strategy Best Online Game 2011 in Iran

Favorite Strategy Game - 3rd place in 2011
Winner for Best Strategy Game in 2008
Nominated for Best Graphics in 2008
Nominated for Innovative Studio Award (Best Newcomer in Germany) in 2008

Sabaya Girly 1st place in Favorite Community Game in 2012

2nd place in Best 2D Game in 2012
2 place in Most Popular in 2012
Winner for Favorite Community Game in 2011
Best 2D Game - 2nd place in 2011
Winner for Favorite Community Game in 2010
Most Popular game - 2nd place in 2010

Dark Orbit Action & Adventure the coveted HME Award 2009 for best browser game
Drakensang Action & Adventure the award for the “Best Browsergame”

the jury and audience award for the “Best Innovation”
the jury award for the “Best Role-playing Browser MMO”
the award for “Best Mobile/Browsergame”
two awards for “best roleplay game” and “best browser game”
the Fantasy Award at the Role Play Convention in Cologne

Soccer Champions Sports -
Tauri World War & Strategy -
Nemexia War & Strategy -
Rising Cities variety the Audience Award for the “Best Tycoon Browser MMO”
Speed Up Racing -

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Newsha7 (talk) 10:05, 5 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Newsha. Here's a quick review of the main issues.
An encyclopedic article should be about the company - it's history, significance and purpose. What you've got, above, is largely just a list of products and awards, which make the article seem highly promotional. :Wikipedia needs reliable, independent sources to support its content - of the references you've provided, only the arabnet.me one could be considered to meet those criteria. All of the rest are from AOG themselves, which makes them highly suspect (and also looks like further promotion. You've also included links to external sites throughout the text, which goes against Wikipedia's external links policy.
To make the article more suitable:
  • Find more sources which talk about AOG (but which are not derived from AOG press releases or AOG themselves). This page gives you a quick overview of the sort of sources you need.
  • Using these sources, write some more information about the organisation itself, not its products.
  • Trim the list of products to include just the most notable releases.
  • Remove all of the external links in the article except for references (which should be formatted [[User:Yunshui/References for beginners|like this)
Then submit the page to Articles for creation, and you should see it accepted. Yunshui  10:46, 5 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of ArabOnlineGames

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Hello Newsha7,

I wanted to let you know that I just tagged ArabOnlineGames for deletion, because it seems to be promotional, rather than an encyclopedia article.

If you feel that the article shouldn't be deleted and want more time to work on it, you can contest this deletion, but please don't remove the speedy deletion tag from the top.

You can leave a note on my talk page if you have questions.  SmileBlueJay97  talk  11:24, 6 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

If this is the first article that you have created, you may want to read the guide to writing your first article.

You may want to consider using the Article Wizard to help you create articles.

A tag has been placed on Arabonlinegames, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Click here to contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be removed without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator, or if you have already done so, you can place a request here. Hell in a Bucket (talk) 08:31, 9 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

If this is the first article that you have created, you may want to read the guide to writing your first article.

You may want to consider using the Article Wizard to help you create articles.

A tag has been placed on ArabOnlineGames, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Click here to contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be removed without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator, or if you have already done so, you can place a request here. Hell in a Bucket (talk) 08:10, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Delayed response

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I apoligize for the delayed response. The page is being deleted because it is not showing reliable sourcing to show how it is a notable business and appears to be advertising the service rather then report on a noteworthy subject for an encyclopedia. Just my observations. Hell in a Bucket (talk) 08:18, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

August 2014

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You have been blocked indefinitely from editing for advertising or promotion. From your contributions, this seems to be your only purpose. If you think there are good reasons why you should be unblocked, you may appeal this block by adding the following text below this notice: {{unblock|reason=Your reason here ~~~~}}. However, you should read the guide to appealing blocks first.  5 albert square (talk) 08:35, 10 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]