User talk:Mwils/sandbox

Although your writing is very clear and concise, the article that you developed is actually shorter and contains less information than the existing Wikipedia page for the striped burrfish. I suggest finding more information about each area. In addition, your article lacks a sections on behavior (it does mention feeding, but not reproduction), conservation, and taxonomy. I think it would be a lot stronger with those sections added to it. I am concerned that you have not contributed anything new to this topic; it is way too similar to the exiting Wikipedia page. When it comes time for us to publish our work to Wikipedia, how would your work fit in with the existing work without being repetitious? Finally, I would be happy to help you add content to your article; we could always talk before or after class. Dloesch17 (talk) 00:42, 5 April 2017 (UTC)