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Your submission at Articles for creation: God is Good Motors (November 29)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Bkissin were:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

As a large bus line in Nigeria, the company is probably notable. However, some of the language used in the article comes off overly promotional. For example, I wouldn't mention in the first sentence that GIGM is the "leading indigenous road transport company... [in] Nigeria". Look at how bus companies like Concord Coach Lines, Greyhound and Megabus put together their articles. None of those article are perfect, but they have a slightly better introduction.

I might start with something like "God is Good Motors is an intercity bus company that operates in Nigeria. Founded in 1998 in Edo State, it is the country's leading intercity bus company."

"As a bunch of touts" may not be understandable to a local audience. You may want to fix that.

This is on the right track, and after a little work, should be good to accept!

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Bkissin (talk) 16:42, 29 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Mrbizzybrain! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Bkissin (talk) 16:42, 29 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

File permission problem with File:God is Good Motors Logo.jpg

Thanks for uploading File:God is Good Motors Logo.jpg. I noticed that while you provided a valid copyright licensing tag, there is no proof that the creator of the file has agreed to release it under the given license.

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Your submission at Articles for creation: God is Good Motors has been accepted

God is Good Motors, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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Bkissin (talk) 17:16, 3 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]