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Your submission at Articles for creation: Robert Harvey Oshatz (November 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Voorts was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Robert Harvey Oshatz and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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voorts (talk/contributions) 21:02, 3 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Mfabwiki! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! voorts (talk/contributions) 21:02, 3 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. I made some edits and am in a real-time chat session as I type. Asking mainly for help on Neutral voice and Notability. More to follow. Mfabwiki (talk) 21:03, 5 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Robert Harvey Oshatz has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Robert Harvey Oshatz. Thanks! Chumpih ^t 21:53, 28 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. I'm digging deeper into Secondary Sources although many of them are pretty obscure and/or questionable as to their independence from the subject. Mfabwiki (talk) 22:43, 28 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]