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Your submission at Articles for creation: Collaborating, Learning and Adapting (April 6)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of websites and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Particularly we would need all additional significant sourcing.

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SwisterTwister talk 18:57, 6 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Collaborating, Learning and Adapting (April 8)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by TheSandDoctor was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Draft is off to a good start but more citations would be beneficial.

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TheSandDoctor (talk) 05:13, 8 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Learning Agenda has been accepted

Learning Agenda, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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SwisterTwister talk 23:36, 2 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

May 2017

Hello. This is a message to let you know that one or more of your recent contributions, such as the edit you made to United States Department of Labor, did not appear constructive and has been reverted. Please take some time to familiarise yourself with our policies and guidelines. You can find information about these at our welcome page which also provides further information about contributing constructively to this encyclopedia. If you only meant to make test edits, please use the sandbox for that. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you may leave a message on my talk page. I'm not sure why you thought Learning Agenda was a useful addition to the "See also" section of this article. Julietdeltalima (talk) 19:43, 11 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Please refrain from making unconstructive edits to Wikipedia, as you did at PricewaterhouseCoopers. Your edits appear to be disruptive and have been reverted.

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Please ensure you are familiar with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines, and please do not continue to make edits that appear disruptive. Continual disruptive editing may result in loss of editing privileges. Please stop adding Learning Agenda to the "See also" sections of articles not related to Learning Agenda. If you think I'm wrong about this, please talk to one of the editors at the Teahouse. Julietdeltalima (talk) 19:45, 11 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Link from one article to another using wikilinks, not external links

@Mbphnyc: Welcome to Wikipedia! You have not been properly inserting wikilinks (links from one article to another) in your edits such as this edit (Learning agenda) and this edit (Organizational learning); you have been mistakenly inserting external links instead of wikilinks. Please learn how to insert proper wikilinks and refrain from making this mistake in the future. Help:Link provides more information on this topic. Thanks, Biogeographist (talk) 19:59, 11 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Collaborating, Learning and Adapting (May 17)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Chris troutman was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the general guideline on notability and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

CLA is a USAID concept so I'm not sure it's notable. This draft steals at least two sentences from USIAD materials that must be rewritten or quoted. The fact that this draft continually refers to "the literature reviewed" makes it read like an academic essay. This isn't written an an encyclopedic entry about CLA; it's pushing for CLA's use. There are better, more independent sources out there is this is too sloppily-written for me to accept.

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Chris Troutman (talk) 08:11, 17 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Clarification needed

@Mbphnyc: Please see Talk:Collaborating, learning and adapting § Clarification needed. Thanks, Biogeographist (talk) 19:41, 6 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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