User talk:Maweeky/Personal Sandbox

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Good Article. I Really liked the way that Manifest Destiny and Issues on Feminism were given to back up the changing ideas of masculinity! The only thing is I would like to see more ways the idea of restrained manhood relates to the two. The lead was also really good. Kelsey1108 (talk) 23:11, 25 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I really wish I would've read this before last week's quiz. Reading this made it pretty easy to understand what restrained manhood is and what the values were behind it. Giving background information as to what Manifest Destiny is rather than just providing links is something I can appreciate. I'm pretty crazy when it comes to some style things, so I don't know that this is that important, but it stood out to me: Try to be consistent with your use of U.S. and United States. Maybe simply use United States as first reference in the lead section and switch off to U.S. for the rest of the article rather than switching back and forth. Smashleynguyen (talk) 15:14, 28 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Very informative and thorough. The article was well organized and covered many interesting facets of the subject. Lead was interesting and sparked interest immediately.JimKirn888 (talk) 21:12, 28 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]