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Your submission at Articles for creation: Detroit Study Club (May 18)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Etothepi was:

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etothepi 👽 ^(u)•(t) 21:01, 18 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Mary Henrietta Graham! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! etothepi 👽 ^(u)•(t) 21:01, 18 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Detroit Study Club has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Detroit Study Club. Thanks! Bkissin (talk) 21:52, 18 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Detroit Study Club (September 17)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by NotTheFakeJTP was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Sentences such as "This class project would not have been possible without the support of the Detroit Study Club and its members" are unencyclopedic. Consider reorganizing this to comply with Wikipedia stylization guidelines.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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JTP ^{(talk • contribs)} 04:06, 17 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Mary Henrietta Graham (talk) 23:46, 16 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi NotTheFakeJTP,

Thanks so much for your feedback. I have resubmitted the article with substantial changes. I used the Rosenwald Schools as an example to fix my language and substantially shorten the article to only include essential information for an impartial encyclopedia entry.

"We" refers to a professor that I worked with to gather information for this project. Neither of us have any formal affiliations with the Detroit Study Club. I am the only one with access to my account and that can edit the article.

Hopefully this new version meets expectations. I look forward to receiving feedback.

Thank you.

Your submission at Articles for creation: Detroit Study Club has been accepted

Detroit Study Club, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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Bkissin (talk) 18:36, 21 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]