User talk:Margieparikh

Hello Margieparikh and welcome to Wikipedia. Unfortunately, your substantial additions to Vikramōrvaśīyam have been reverted, because they are effectively unreadable to anyone not familiar with Sanskrit script. Please remember that Wikipedia is a worldwide encyclopedia, intended to inform and educate general readers in all English-speaking countries. You are welcome to add the passages again if you give the names in Latin script, with the Sanskrit in brackets if you consider it necessary and only at the first use of each word. Please see this page for further guidance. Thank you for your interest: Noyster (talk), 11:15, 17 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Noyster, thank you for this intimation. Today I logged in precisely for that reason. I thought that I should replace the Devanagari script with English. Can you please restore those changes so that I can edit? Regards,: Margie (talk), 29 November 2014

Done - if a similar need arises again, you can yourself revert to an earlier version of any page by opening the History tab and selecting the time/date belonging to the version you want. And could you try and add references to show where all the information is derived from. Thanks and I look forward to reading it!: Noyster (talk), 11:43, 29 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for this intimation! I made the changes - mainly replaced Sanskrit with English words and inserted links to Wiki pages for perspective. What do you think of it? Regards,: Margie (talk), 1 December 2014

Great work Margie, it looks to me like a good standard of article, and completes our set of three articles about Kalidasa's plays. A few points:

As we discourage weblinks in the text, I've converted a couple to references and another couple to Wikilinks.
I noticed two small pieces of Sanskrit that still need translating: (i) in "Origin of the plot" under Rigveda, a speech by Urvashi, (ii) in "Major Acts" under Act 5, "entry of" ???
Finally, if you have any more published sources for the commentary in "Origin" and "Adaptation", it would be useful to quote these.

Sincere thanks again!: Noyster (talk), 11:26, 1 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Noyster, thank you for your diligence and help! :D feels great! I have followed a book which is in the Gujarati language, and have quoted the same as a reference especially for the sections on the origin of the plot and adaptations by Kalidasa. The play with a critical note and translation is available online, to which I added an external reference. LMK if anything else can improve this page - I had in mind little notes on each of the main characters, but I think it will make the page too long. May be, in future, as a separate page branching-out from this one! What do you say? Regards,: Margie (talk), Margieparikh (talk) 04:03, 5 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

If you like you may add to the sections on "Main characters" and "Supporting characters". One or two sentences about each character would be about right. It's useful to use the asterisk * to separate the items in a list, like
*Character 1
*Character 2
*Character 3,
which shows on the page as

Character 1
Character 2
Character 3

: Noyster (talk), 09:19, 13 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Karnabharam by Bhasa (March 15)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

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Onel5969 (talk) 22:38, 15 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Margieparikh, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Onel5969 (talk) 22:38, 15 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Karnabharam by Bhasa (May 11)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Joseph2302 was:

The proposed article is not suitable for Wikipedia. Because Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, articles on fictional subjects should cover their real-world context and contain sourced analysis, offering detail on a work's development, impact or historical significance—not just a summary of the plot. You may wish to add this content to an existing article. As anyone can edit Wikipedia, you are free to do so yourself.

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Joseph2302 (talk) 01:00, 11 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Draft:Karnabharam by Bhasa concern

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Your draft article, Draft:Karnabharam by Bhasa

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Puffin ^{Let's talk!} 10:29, 25 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Karnabharam by Bhasa (June 17)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Jcc was:

Thank you for your submission, but the subject of this article already exists in Wikipedia. You can find it and improve it at Karnabharam instead.

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Hi there- this is a great article- just move the bits you want over to the article in mainspace. If you need help, ask me.

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jcc (tea and biscuits) 23:01, 17 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Some baklava for you!

Thanks for moving your great article on Karnabharam into mainspace! I hope you continue to contribute to Wikipedia, your contributions are much appreciated. jcc (tea and biscuits) 12:49, 29 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Karnabharam by Bhasa has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Karnabharam by Bhasa. Thanks! Legacypac (talk) 12:17, 28 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]