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Your submission at Articles for creation: Macintoshia (November 15)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Taking Out The Trash were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission provides insufficient context for those unfamiliar with the subject matter. Please see the guide to writing better articles for information on how to better format your submission.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Macintoshia and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Taking Out The Trash (talk) 18:29, 15 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, MacintoshlovesToriel! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Taking Out The Trash (talk) 18:29, 15 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Old-Merchants National Bank & Trust Company moved to draftspace

Thanks for your contributions to Old-Merchants National Bank & Trust Company. Unfortunately, I do not think it is ready for publishing at this time because it has no sources. I have converted your article to a draft which you can improve, undisturbed for a while.

Please see more information at Help:Unreviewed new page. When the article is ready for publication, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page OR move the page back. Significa liberdade (she/her) (talk) 23:21, 27 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hamblin Opera House moved to draftspace

Thanks for your contributions to Hamblin Opera House. Unfortunately, I do not think it is ready for publishing at this time because it has no sources. I have converted your article to a draft which you can improve, undisturbed for a while.

Please see more information at Help:Unreviewed new page. When the article is ready for publication, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page OR move the page back. Significa liberdade (she/her) (talk) 23:43, 27 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hamblin Opera House (December 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Star Mississippi were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just brief mentions about the subject or routine announcements)
reliable
secondary
strictly independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet all four of these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please do not re-submit without addressing the issues you have been advised of.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Hamblin Opera House and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Star Mississippi 02:41, 28 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hamblin Opera House (December 30)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by MicrobiologyMarcus were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

The comment the reviewer left was:

submission is nearly entirely void of inline citations.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Hamblin Opera House and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

microbiologyMarcus ^{(petri dish·growths)} 20:27, 30 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

February 2024

Hello, I'm Materialscientist. I wanted to let you know that I reverted one of your recent contributions—specifically this edit to Battle Creek Tower—because it did not appear constructive. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. If you have any questions, you can ask for assistance at the Teahouse or the Help desk. Thanks. Materialscientist (talk) 01:28, 8 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Old-Merchants National Bank & Trust Company (February 8)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MicrobiologyMarcus was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

The comment the reviewer left was:

the purpose of the article isn't to tell a story, but to be factual. Consider how most wikipedia articles start: Old-Merchants National Bank & Trust Company is a former bank that was formed in 1851 and provided x, y, and z. It was merged into a, b, c until its closure in 1982.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Old-Merchants National Bank & Trust Company and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

microbiologyMarcus ^{(petri dish·growths)} 21:23, 8 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Links to draft articles

Please do not introduce links in actual articles to draft articles, as you did to List of defunct department stores of the United States. Since a draft is not yet ready for the main article space, it is not in shape for ordinary readers, and links from articles should not go to a draft. Such links are contrary to the Manual of Style. These links have been removed. Thank you. - Arjayay (talk) 20:58, 16 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Charlotte Plaza(Charlotte, Michigan)

Hello, and thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. A page you recently created, Draft:Charlotte Plaza(Charlotte, Michigan), may not conform to some of Wikipedia's guidelines for new pages, so it has been moved to where you can continue to work on it. Please consider using the Article Wizard or the Articles for Creation procedure. For more information about creating articles, you may want to read "Your first article". You may also want to read our introduction page to learn more about contributing. Thank you. AusLondonder (talk) 12:51, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hayes Green Beach Memorial Hospital moved to draftspace

Thanks for your contributions to Hayes Green Beach Memorial Hospital. Unfortunately, I do not think it is ready for publishing at this time because it has no sources and it needs to more clearly connect the title to the subject. I have converted your article to a draft which you can improve, undisturbed for a while.

Please see more information at Help:Unreviewed new page. When the article is ready for publication, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page OR move the page back. Significa liberdade (she/her) (talk) 00:03, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, MacintoshlovesToriel,

Please do not put unfinished articles into the main space of the project. They just need to then be moved to Draft space so it creates more work for other editors. Create and develop articles in Draft space or your User space like your Sandbox. When you think it is ready, submit it to Articles for Creation for review.

If you have any questions about this, please bring them to the Teahouse. Thank you. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 19:36, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Links to draft articles - again

Please stop. If you continue to vandalize Wikipedia, as you did at List of hospitals in Michigan, you may be blocked from editing.
It was clearly explained, above, that you should not add links to draft articles, but you have continued doing so. Please stop - Arjayay (talk) 20:09, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Tallest buildings in Battle Creek moved to draftspace

Thanks for your contributions to Tallest buildings in Battle Creek. Unfortunately, I do not think it is ready for publishing at this time because it has no sources. I have converted your article to a draft which you can improve, undisturbed for a while.

Please see more information at Help:Unreviewed new page. When the article is ready for publication, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page OR move the page back. Significa liberdade (she/her) (talk) 23:43, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Links to draft articles - again - again

You may be blocked from editing without further warning the next time you vandalize Wikipedia, as you did at Heritage Tower (Battle Creek, Michigan).
It has repeatedly been explained to you, above, that you should not add links to draft articles, but you have continued doing so. Please stop before you are blocked. Thank you. - Arjayay (talk) 16:57, 16 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry that I keep Linking draft articles, but is it possible for you or someone else to delete three of my drafts (Draft:Leila Young Post Montgomery Hospital, Draft: Macintoshia and Draft:Sands McCamly). The reason being I have given up on them MacintoshlovesToriel (talk) 18:39, 20 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Disambiguation link notification for April 21

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All right MacintoshlovesToriel (talk) 12:37, 21 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Sands McCamly

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Your draft article, Draft:Sands McCamly

Hello, MacintoshlovesToriel. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, "Sands McCamly".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 21:10, 27 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Liz Thanks! I was done with it anyway. MacintoshlovesToriel (talk) 22:01, 27 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Hayes Green Beach Memorial Hospital

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Concern regarding Draft:Leila Young Post Montgomery Hospital

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Concern regarding Draft:Tallest buildings in Battle Creek

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Concern regarding Draft:Macintoshia

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Concern regarding Draft:Old-Merchants National Bank & Trust Company

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Your draft article, Draft:Hayes Green Beach Memorial Hospital

Hello, MacintoshlovesToriel. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, "Hayes Green Beach Memorial Hospital".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 23:55, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Leila Young Post Montgomery Hospital

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 17:16, 28 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Charlotte Plaza(Charlotte, Michigan)

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Your draft article, Draft:Macintoshia

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 02:33, 10 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Charlotte Plaza(Charlotte, Michigan)

Hello, MacintoshlovesToriel. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, "Charlotte Plaza".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

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