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Your submission at Articles for creation: Honkaku Shochu and Awamori Day (March 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Eviolite was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Needs independent, reliable sources.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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eviolite (talk) 23:11, 28 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Lisa Kawakami! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! eviolite (talk) 23:11, 28 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Thanks for the very kind email, wikipedia is very difficult:(

But I will do my best to learn. If I have any problems, I'll consult the chat.

Thanks a lot! Lisa Kawakami (talk) 20:43, 29 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome!

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Let me know if you need anything! SkyTheWolf (Talk) 20:49, 29 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

thank you for your kindness!!

I'm really a beginner and it's difficult, but I'm trying my best.

So may I consult with you on this?

I have a draft that I'd like you to approve, if possible... Lisa Kawakami (talk) 20:52, 29 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello sadly I am not able to review drafts however you said that you are struggling. If you don't mind I would like to either Adopt (WP:ADOPTION) or Mentor (WP:MENTOR) you in order to help you adjust and ease the struggle. Maybe we could even become friends. Its up to you if you do want to I will guide you through one of the processes. SkyTheWolf (Talk) 21:02, 29 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

If you want I might even be able to help you with your draft. SkyTheWolf (Talk) 21:04, 29 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I am more than willing to help you with the draft. SkyTheWolf (Talk) 22:03, 29 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Kokushu (March 29)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted because it included copyrighted content, which is not permitted on Wikipedia.

This submission appears to be taken from https://kokushu-museum.com/en/about-kokushu-digitalmuseum/. Wikipedia cannot accept material copied from elsewhere, unless it explicitly and verifiably has been released to the world under a suitably-free and compatible copyright license or into the public domain and is written in an acceptable tone—this includes material that you own the copyright to. You should attribute the content of a draft to outside sources, using citations, but copying and pasting or closely paraphrasing sources is not acceptable. The entire draft should be written using your own words and structure. Note to reviewers: do not leave copyright violations sitting in the page history. Please follow the instructions here.

You are welcome to write an article on the subject, but please do not use copyrighted work.

Draft:Kokushu may be deleted at any time unless the copied text is removed. Copyrighted work cannot be allowed to remain on Wikipedia.
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KylieTastic (talk) 20:59, 29 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Understood! Thank you so much for your kind attention! In case you're wondering, it's the client's wiki, so I got approval to copy and paste, but wikipedia is difficult:(

I'll do my best!

Thank you so much! Lisa Kawakami (talk) 21:19, 29 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, given that you said "the client" I assume you have some sort of personal or financial connection to the subjects you're writing about. If so, please keep in mind Wikipedia's conflict-of-interest guideline (this simple guide may help) which requires you to, among other things, disclose your connection. eviolite (talk) 21:34, 29 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

There is actually no money involved in this business, and I am writing this as a service because I have grown fond of sake, but should I still write it that way? Thanks a lot! Lisa Kawakami (talk) 22:01, 29 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Kokushu Digital Museum (March 30)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by TipsyElephant was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

No new sources were cited since the draft was last declined. The page will require multiple WP:RELIABLE and WP:INDEPENDENT sources with in depth coverage of the subject to demonstrate that it passes WP:CORPDEPTH. TipsyElephant (talk) 16:52, 30 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Kokushu Digital Museum and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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TipsyElephant (talk) 16:52, 30 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Japan Sake & Shochu Academy (March 30)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Rusalkii was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Japan Sake & Shochu Academy and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Japan Sake & Shochu Academy, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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Rusalkii (talk) 17:18, 30 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Japan Sake and Shochu Makers Association (March 30)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Numberguy6 was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Japan Sake and Shochu Makers Association and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Numberguy6 (talk) 22:56, 30 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Kokushu Digital Museum (April 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Mako001 were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The only changes since it was declined were to add a load of material sourced to the museum's own website (which has caused some WP:NOT issues), to add some sources which are of no relevance to the museum (rather only to Kokushu itself), and to add some other deprecated sources, like Wikipedia itself. There were already multiple issues, and the latest edits have only made the article even less acceptable for mainspace than it already was.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Kokushu Digital Museum and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Mako001 (C) (T) 🇺🇦 08:04, 3 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Honkaku Shochu and Awamori Day (April 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Mako001 were:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

This submission is not suitable for Wikipedia. Please read 'What Wikipedia is not' for more information.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Honkaku Shochu and Awamori Day and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Honkaku Shochu and Awamori Day, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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Mako001 (C) (T) 🇺🇦 12:01, 3 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Kokushu (April 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Mako001 was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

For some context, there are some related articles which were apparently written by the same editor which are highly promotional in nature, and this article is intended to help prop up those.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Kokushu and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Kokushu, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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Mako001 (C) (T) 🇺🇦 13:01, 3 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 12:04, 3 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Kokushu

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 14:01, 3 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]