User talk:LeslieSP

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16:03, 7 April 2017 (UTC)

Peer review: In the first sentence of the second paragraph look at changing the word "earlier" to "early" possibly. The second sentence second paragraph take the word "Like" and look to start it with a more formal word or take it out completely. I like the touch of adding employment forecast, however i think possibly adding some of the large companies of employment could be helpful. All your links do work so that is a good sign and is a reliable source. look at adding a source for "The Bay Area has a high concentration of knowledge-based industries, research centers and universities." Dan Law3 (talk) 17:59, 4 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]