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[edit]Hi, many of your wording changes like Special:Diff/1258184023 are counter-productive, as you replace more neutral words with more promotional/loaded words. I invite you to read Wikipedia:Words to watch – plain wording is usually preferable to more extravagant phrasing. Chaotic Enby (talk · contribs) 01:35, 19 November 2024 (UTC)
- ok thank you for your review LIUCGiorgio (talk) 11:34, 19 November 2024 (UTC)
- Again, edits such as Special:Diff/1258384029, replacing words in promotional phrases by just-as-promotional synonyms, isn't helpful. Sometimes, sentences like
The Bove Path today embodies the spirit of alpine exploration and preserves the pastoral history of the Val Grande area, connecting modern-day hikers with the agricultural and cultural heritage of the region.
have to be removed, rather than reworded. Chaotic Enby (talk · contribs) 14:02, 19 November 2024 (UTC)
- Again, edits such as Special:Diff/1258384029, replacing words in promotional phrases by just-as-promotional synonyms, isn't helpful. Sometimes, sentences like