User talk:Kpixley23/sandbox

Hey Kpixley,

In your history section I did not quite understand why three sections were greyed out. I know it stated that it’s the history of Charlestown but what if you add a subtitle so that the reader actually knows what part of the history their learning/reading about. Also there were a couple grammars errors, I corrected as much as I noticed but just reread your columns next time. I really enjoyed the organization section. You gave great information, not too much or too little about each organization. In addition I like how you got in specific details on the Urban Policy’s when it came to the MBTA. You gave a lot of forward information. I feel like your article is well written and pretty forward, now it’s just to make it all go together with what’s already up about Charlestown. Nice job. Kaydeeay (talk) 15:14, 15 April 2016 (UTC)