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Your submission at Articles for creation: Glamour Shots (October 26)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

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Theroadislong (talk) 20:23, 26 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Glamour Shots (October 27)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Dan arndt were:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just brief mentions about the subject or routine announcements)
reliable
secondary
strictly independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet all four of these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Glamour Shots and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Dan arndt (talk) 01:54, 27 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Refs

May not be enough to get this over the hump, but refs are better embedded in the text after the facts they verify rather than all at the end. Even for a stub, this is a bit too short. Is there info on whether these were franchises? Corporate owned? History of ownership of the company? Any articles in business or trade magazines as to why the decline to a mere remnant of what it was? Was there competition? David notMD (talk) 12:09, 27 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Khabuda, I am doing some digging trying to find some more sources. I found a couple pieces in The Wall Street Journal, but they are not in-depth. Will try to do more but do remind me (a quick note on my talk page will do). S0091 (talk) 19:44, 27 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I really appreciate it. I'm going to modify my draft and expand beyond my stub attempt. I have enough material with my existing sources to write a larger article, but the quality of the sources is still my problem. I don't know why I'm doing this, but now I'm determined and kind of enjoying myself. Thanks again for the effort. Khabuda (talk) 01:23, 28 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Glamour Shots (October 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Bonadea were:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just brief mentions about the subject or routine announcements)
reliable
secondary
strictly independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet all four of these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Glamour Shots and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

bonadea contributions talk 13:29, 28 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Glamour Shots

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 14:02, 30 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]