User talk:Kaitling/sandbox

What does the article (or section) do well? - it puts everything in easy to understand words. I did not know much about antimicrobial resistance and its causes but I feel like I have a very good understanding of the basics after reading the article - the article is concise, but full of good information - the format is also great. It makes the article very straight forward and easy to understand - good scientific stats! helps reinforce reader's understanding

What changes would you suggest overall? - you already mentioned that you have to put in other sections to the article, but other than that, the causes section of this article is really good. The sub sections help because it breaks up the article nicely.

What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution? - adding other sections like how antimicrobial resistance can be avoided in the future. Maybe there are ways to educate the public? Chae00 (talk) 15:35, 28 February 2020 (UTC)

Did you glean anything from your classmate's work that could be applicable to your own? - I like how concise this article is. I feel like my article has a lot of information that can be condensed.