User talk:KDH26326HD/sandbox

Sources

Your sources look good. Josef Horáček (talk) 17:12, 27 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Did you add the sources to the article? Josef Horáček (talk) 21:00, 3 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The Lead

I don't see your draft. Josef Horáček (talk) 22:00, 1 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

This is not a good article to write a lead for. The article is very short, incomplete, and poorly written (the long quotation has no place there). Besides, the first paragraph works as a suitable lead. The real problem is that the article doesn't have any section breaks. You should find another article to write a lead for. Josef Horáček (talk) 22:21, 9 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]