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Hello, Jrnevans2018, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:28, 12 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. This is a notice that the page you created, Sandbox/new, was tagged as a test page under section G2 of the criteria for speedy deletion and has been or soon may be deleted. Please use the sandbox for any other tests you want to do. Take a look at the welcome page if you would like to learn more about contributing to our encyclopedia.

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Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. This is a notice that the page you created, Webb's City and the Civil Rights Movement of St. Petersburg, Florida, was tagged as a test page under section G2 of the criteria for speedy deletion and has been or soon may be deleted. Please use the sandbox for any other tests you want to do. Take a look at the welcome page if you would like to learn more about contributing to our encyclopedia.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator, or if you have already done so, you can place a request here. Home Lander (talk) 03:39, 28 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. This is a notice that Sandbox/abcd, a page that you created, has been tagged for deletion. This has been done under two or more of the criteria for speedy deletion, by which pages can be deleted at any time, without discussion. If the page meets any of these strictly-defined criteria, then it may soon be deleted by an administrator. The reasons it has been tagged are:

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. Home Lander (talk) 03:39, 28 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Information icon There is currently a discussion at Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard regarding an issue with which you may have been involved. The thread is Duplicate article cleanup request. Home Lander (talk) 14:37, 28 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  • Hi! I've merged the two pages together, as it makes more sense to have a single article as opposed to two separate ones at this point in time. I've done some editing to the article as well. I've added material that was in the prior version of the article, as well as tweak the writing a little to merge it together and make it fit Wikipedia's style guidelines a little more. One part that I did remove was the statement "Unfortunately for Doc Webb", as this can be seen as a point of view statement. In other words, it's something that would be subjective to the reader and could also be interpreted as an opinion or judgement on the situation, which shouldn't be in the article. The writing isn't bad at all, but definitely be careful to avoid POV statements and casual writing styles, since those don't fit into the style guidelines.
Other than that, my main recommendation here would be to continue to flesh out the article by adding more sourcing and more about the general history of the store, as this will help give readers a better overall picture of the store. You may also want to add in something about the store's owner as well, since this probably impacted the store and its issues with the Civil Right's era in St. Petersburg. This could also use more sourcing to help back up claims. You don't want to rely too heavily on a single source, this this doesn't really show the depth of coverage that can come from using multiple sources. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:04, 28 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]