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Happy editing! DoubleGrazing (talk) 15:01, 17 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Managing a conflict of interest

Hello, JordanWaters. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on the page Draft:Tournament Players Club, Colorado, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a conflict of interest may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. We ask that you:

avoid editing or creating articles about yourself, your family, friends, colleagues, company, organization or competitors;
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disclose your conflict of interest when discussing affected articles (see Wikipedia:Conflict of interest#How to disclose a COI);
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In addition, you are required by the Wikimedia Foundation's terms of use to disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution which forms all or part of work for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation. See Wikipedia:Paid-contribution disclosure.

Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. DoubleGrazing (talk) 15:02, 17 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Okay I understand that. Then how do we go about the page being approved. We are the only TPC no on Wikipedia it seems. JordanWaters (talk) 15:09, 17 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Tournament Players Club, Colorado has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Tournament Players Club, Colorado. Thanks! DoubleGrazing (talk) 15:04, 17 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Can you work towards publishing the page on our behalf? JordanWaters (talk) 15:10, 17 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Tournament Players Club, Colorado (March 17)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DoubleGrazing was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Notability requires significant coverage in multiple independent, reliable, secondary sources; arguably none of the sources cited meets these criteria (the GolfDigest as a publication is suitable, but the profile is very short, and in any case alone not enough). --

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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DoubleGrazing (talk) 15:10, 17 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, JordanWaters! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! DoubleGrazing (talk) 15:10, 17 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

What is your best suggestion on having someone publish the article then? JordanWaters (talk) 15:13, 17 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Two things

Hi, in response to your various questions above, I'm collating the answers here. There are two things you must address:

You need to declare any conflict of interest (COI), which judging by your user page and the article draft edit notes you have, but which hasn't been declared properly. Please see the instructions in the 'Managing a conflict of interest' section above for how to do this. Furthermore:
1. Please note that you must additionally declare if (as I assume is the case) you are being paid to edit this article, as these two matters (COI and paid editing) are separate, albeit often connected. Please do not edit further before addressing this issue.
2. In editing the article, take extra care not to use promotional or WP:PEACOCK language. Stick to neutral POV, modest tone, and factual expressions.
3. Do not be tempted to move the draft into the main article space yourself.
The reason why I declined the article is that notability (see WP:N) has not been established in the light of the sources cited. Please study carefully the guidelines at WP:GNG, which explain what sort of sources are needed — in short, they must be independent, reliable, and secondary, and provide significant coverage (not just passing mentions etc.) of the article subject (not just indirectly related matters). And if such sources cannot be found, then the subject probably isn't notable enough. Notability is a fundamental requirement for inclusion on Wikipedia, and until that has been established the draft cannot be accepted.

HTH, -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 15:35, 17 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

March 2022

As previously advised, your edits give the impression you have a financial stake in promoting a topic, but you have not complied with Wikipedia's mandatory paid editing disclosure requirements. You were asked to cease editing until you responded by either stating that you are not being directly or indirectly compensated for your edits, or by complying with the mandatory requirements under the Wikimedia Terms of Use that you disclose your employer, client and affiliation. Again, you can post such a disclosure on your user page at User:JordanWaters, and the template {{Paid}} can be used for this purpose – e.g. in the form: {{paid|user=JordanWaters|employer=InsertName|client=InsertName}}. Please respond before making any other edits to Wikipedia. If you are the marketing coordinator for the golf course, that is considered paid editing. You do not have to be specifically paid to edit. 331dot (talk) 22:40, 22 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Updated to your exact request. JordanWaters (talk) 22:44, 22 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Are you able to review the page for changes and publishing? JordanWaters (talk) 16:23, 23 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

You are welcome to resubmit the draft. You keep attempting to add a notice intended for user pages(such as yours, User:JordanWaters) on the draft, please do not do this. You may declare your COI on the draft talk page, Draft talk:Tournament Players Club, Colorado. Please read WP:COI for information on how to do that. If you find the coding too complicated(many do, nothing wrong with that), you may simply write a statement detailing your COI and paid status. 331dot (talk) 16:27, 23 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I changed on the draft itself to the {{connected contributor}} coding and on my talk page added both the {{connected contributor}} and {{UserboxCOI}}. I'm not new to coding just so confused my reading the WP:COI page when it states "If you become involved in an article where you have any COI, you should always let other editors know about it, whenever and wherever you discuss the topic." Just trying to put it all out there so I can hopefully get this published. JordanWaters (talk) 16:34, 23 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Tournament Players Club, Colorado (July 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Jovanmilic97 was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Same issues persist, the coverage in these sources is not significant enough.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Tournament Players Club, Colorado and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Jovanmilic97 (talk) 21:24, 28 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Tournament Players Club, Colorado (January 20)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Akevsharma was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Tournament Players Club, Colorado and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Akevsharma (talk) 10:32, 20 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Tournament Players Club, Colorado

Hello, JordanWaters. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Tournament Players Club, Colorado, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 11:03, 22 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]