User talk:Jojaffer/sandbox

I am improving the already created article Sabermetrics. There are flaws in the structure of the entire article and in the headings of the different components in the article. I found it difficult trying to determine what information to possibly remove from the original article and what information I could expand on with more sources. There is still more work I would like to do to fully include all of my ideas and I have created the corresponding headings for these ideas. Even though I have noticed that my article drastically varies from the current one, I feel as though so far I have been able to explain the information in a clearer way. Along with adding more details and finding the right areas in the text to use some of the information from the original article, I am looking over a book on Sabermetrics to provide another source and hopefully more facts regarding the topic. I also would like to possibly add an image, but it does not seem necessary for this certain article. Jojaffer (talk) 03:50, 28 November 2016 (UTC)