User talk:Joeless

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Your submission at Articles for creation: University of Michigan Concussion Center (June 11)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by ARandomName123 was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just brief mentions about the subject or routine announcements)
reliable
secondary
strictly independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet all four of these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

All of the sources seem to be from either the University of Michigan or the Concussion Center. Please add some independent, secondary sources with in-depth coverage to show notability.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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ARandomName123 (talk)^{Ping me!} 01:25, 11 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! I went through and added sources from AP News, CBS, Child Care Network, Scientific American, Washington Post and a couple other sources as well.

Thanks! Joeless (talk) 19:25, 11 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Joeless: Please resubmit if you think it is ready. Someone else will provide a second review. ARandomName123 (talk)^{Ping me!} 20:07, 11 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Joeless! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! ARandomName123 (talk)^{Ping me!} 01:25, 11 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: University of Michigan Concussion Center (November 18)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by PK650 was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:University of Michigan Concussion Center and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

PK650 (talk) 00:51, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]