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AfC notification: Draft:Catherine Ross Scientist has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Catherine Ross Scientist. Thanks! Qcne (talk) 12:53, 1 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much your feedback was really helpful and I have amended the submission accordingly.

thanks again Jel Jellyfish Drummer (talk) 16:07, 1 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Catherine Ross Scientist (November 1)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MarcGarver was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The proposed article looks like a resume or the way a faculty member is described on their own website. Please review other articles on academics and try and rewrite in a formal style.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Catherine Ross Scientist and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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MarcGarver (talk) 12:54, 1 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Jellyfish Drummer! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! MarcGarver (talk) 12:54, 1 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Chief Scientific Officer for Scotland (November 1)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted because it included copyrighted content, which is not permitted on Wikipedia.

This submission appears to be taken from https://www.gov.scot/publications/healthcare-science-scotland-defining-strategic-approach/pages/3/, https://www.gov.scot/about/how-government-is-run/directorates/chief-nursing-officer/chief-scientific-officer/. Wikipedia cannot accept material copied from elsewhere, unless it explicitly and verifiably has been released to the world under a suitably free and compatible copyright license or into the public domain and is written in an acceptable tone—this includes material that you own the copyright to. You should attribute the content of a draft to outside sources, using citations, but copying and pasting or closely paraphrasing sources is not acceptable. The entire draft should be written using your own words and structure.

You are welcome to write an article on the subject, but please do not use copyrighted work.

Draft:Chief Scientific Officer for Scotland may be deleted at any time unless the copied text is removed. Copyrighted work cannot be allowed to remain on Wikipedia.
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Wikishovel (talk) 14:01, 1 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome!

Hello, Jellyfish Drummer, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions.

I noticed that one of the first articles you edited was Draft:Catherine Ross Scientist, which appears to be dealing with a topic with which you may have a conflict of interest. In other words, you may find it difficult to write about that topic in a neutral and objective way, because you are, work for, or represent, the subject of that article. Your recent contributions may have already been undone for this very reason.

To reduce the chances of your contributions being undone, you might like to draft your revised article before submission, and then ask me or another editor to proofread it. See our help page on userspace drafts for more details. If the page you created has already been deleted from Wikipedia, but you want to save the content from it to use for that draft, don't hesitate to ask anyone from this list and they will copy it to your user page.

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Catherine Ross (November 1)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Ktkvtsh was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This reads like a WP:CV and is overly promotional WP:PROMO.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Catherine Ross and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Ktkvtsh (talk) 16:25, 1 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much for your feedback which was really helpful, I have now removed all unnecessary information and have based this on a similar profile (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sue_Hill) which i hope will ensure consistency and balance of information. thank you again for taking the time to review this and help me shape it better. Jel Jellyfish Drummer (talk) 17:20, 1 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Catherine Ross has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Catherine Ross. Thanks! Drmies (talk) 17:31, 1 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Catherine Ross (November 2)

Your recent article submission has been rejected and cannot be resubmitted. If you have further questions, you can ask at the Articles for creation help desk or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by Thilsebatti was: This topic is not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia.

Thilsebatti (talk) 04:01, 2 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Catherine Ross (November 2)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Thilsebatti was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Catherine Ross and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Thilsebatti (talk) 04:03, 2 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]