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16:04, 9 October 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Vientiane Rescue (November 7)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Chenzw was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Vientiane Rescue and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Chenzw Talk 13:53, 7 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Vientiane Rescue (December 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Simply an advertisement, complete with both advertising information and sources, simply nothing at all acceptable here. Policy explicitly allows removal of this and such materials are not found to be acceptable for notability.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Vientiane Rescue and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk or on the reviewer's talk page.
You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

SwisterTwister talk 07:25, 3 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Vientiane Rescue has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Vientiane Rescue. Thanks! SwisterTwister talk 00:34, 17 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Vientiane Rescue has been accepted

Vientiane Rescue, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. Note that because you are a logged-in user, you can create articles yourself, and don't have to post a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer.

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Onel5969 ^{TT me} 00:56, 8 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]