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This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:
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Good Evening Hong, I've provided additional references, adjusted some pictures, restructured the sub-titles, and added some minor informations (with sources). Hope this helps. DuckieWackie (talk) 15:40, 12 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Good evening, thank you for the edits! I see that you're also in Brunei, was wondering if there's any way we can connect to discuss this as I see you're pretty experienced with Wikipedia. Hope all is well. @PangalauItsHong (talk) 16:23, 12 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Hello, ItsHong!
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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by GraziePrego were:
Generally good, but some rewriting needed. Some of the sentences are a bit flowery and promotional.
Also needs more citations, especially for the more recent history. Plenty of statements there with no citations to support them.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted because it included copyrighted content, which is not permitted on Wikipedia.
Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Vanderwaalforces was:
An entire paragragh Fridays were declared a weekend holiday and the school syllabus was changed in 1974, in line with the national policy and syllabus wherein English and Malay were taught in primary school. After 1975, the medium of instruction in the school was officially changed to English with the exception of Mandarin Chinese, Bahasa Melayu (Malay), Sejarah (history), music, physical education, art, and moral or civic education. In the same year, government-assigned teachers were brought in to teach Bahasa Melayu (Malay) in the primary level, with their salaries shouldered by the government. In 1976, Year 11 or Form 5 students sat for the GCE Ordinary Level exams (O-Level) for the first time instead of internal exams set by the school. The same year, Year 6 or Primary 6 students were also selected based on Malay and English proficiency to sit for the Primary Certificate of Education (PCE) exams. The next year, students sitting for the PCE and the Brunei Junior Certificate of Education (BJCE) exams achieved record results. only to be backed up by one Blogspot link.
Please use reliable sources.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
Ok thank you for the feedback, though is there any other issues you could find before I edit it and resubmit? Sorry for the trouble and thanks for the feedback. ItsHong (talk) 18:46, 8 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
It will take awhile until a volunteer reviews your draft. Therefore, I do suggest you work on something else in the mean time. Pangalau (talk) 01:09, 26 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
