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Guillaume Fourrier's draft

Hello @InterstellarGamer12321 Could you indicate what kind of information is missing in the Guillaume Fourrier's draft https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Guillaume_Fourrier? Official World records, 13 books with ISBN... Is there some information to add or delete? Thanks for your advices & have a good holiday LaurentLvs (talk) 16:48, 15 August 2023 (UTC)

@LaurentLvs: thank you for getting back to me about my review of your draft. When I had reviewed it a few months ago, the draft had violated WP:BLP policy because there was lots of unreferenced information and referencing for BLPs is always much stricter than for other articles. However, this is not the case anymore as references have been added. The main issue left is with the reliability of the sources added; see the comment Lewolka left on your draft. Make sure that the inline citations actually have information about the sentence they are backing up and that they are all reliable sources. Other than that, the subject clearly meets notability guidelines, so I would recommend waiting for another reviewer to review the draft and to copyedit it so that it follows the guidelines outlined at WP:MOS. InterstellarGamer12321 (talk | contribs) 20:47, 15 August 2023 (UTC)

Thanks for your suggestions on the page I created

I've made the edits you suggested. Technerd1729 (talk) 21:05, 19 August 2023 (UTC)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Okra_Energy_LLC

Hi - many thanks for your helpful comments. I'm struggling a little on knowing how to get better sources. i've looked at similar active sites and see a lot that link to company websites and archived PDFs (like Nigeria LNG). Could you please help me understand what better sources I should use?

I am helping to raise the profile of LNG as a new cleaner energy option in Guatemala. A friend of the company, not an employee, and doing this to help them out. I have added the Connector Contributor to my entry (still trying to work out adding content there).

Thanks again for your input. It genuinely is appreciated. OkraKemp (talk) 22:54, 29 August 2023 (UTC)

@OkraKemp: thank you for getting back to me about my AfC review of your draft. Look for references that are reliable and independent of the company, and the references you add should be enough to establish notability per WP:NCORP. Unreferenced statements should be removed if they are unverifiable. If you need more help you can always ask at the AfC help desk or the Teahouse. InterstellarGamer12321 (talk | contribs) 17:30, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

Message for you

It appears that Askelech left a message for you but put it on my talk page for some unknown reason. You can find it here. Paul Vaurie (talk) 22:06, 3 September 2023 (UTC)

@Paul Vaurie: thanks for telling me about this. Askelech had posted a message to my talk page but removed it straight after, so I assumed that the issues he needed help with were resolved. InterstellarGamer12321 (talk | contribs) 09:19, 4 September 2023 (UTC)

Article of M.Prabhakaran Thampi

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Sony_P_Thampi/sandbox&oldid=1172680529 . Dear InterstellarGamer12321 Please review the article in the link again. I have added sources as you have mentioned in your previous comment Sony P Thampi (talk) 14:44, 6 September 2023 (UTC)

@Sony P Thampi: your sandbox is currently not submitted for review, so I cannot review it. However, even if it was submitted it will not be accepted in its current form because of the huge amount of unreferenced content in the article. Statements should be backed up with inline citations to reliable sources. Also, see WP:COI and declare your conflict of interest or connection with the subject if you have one. InterstellarGamer12321 (talk | contribs) 06:25, 8 September 2023 (UTC)

Sir, I have added some inline citations and submitted via sandbox .Please review Sony P Thampi (talk) 13:46, 8 September 2023 (UTC)

Please review & tell if article is fine Sony P Thampi (talk) 11:37, 9 September 2023 (UTC)

@Sony P Thampi: I have reviewed your draft. Please see your user talk for why it was not accepted. InterstellarGamer12321 (talk | contribs) 13:14, 9 September 2023 (UTC)

Draft:M. Prabhakaran Thampi .Pls review this draft and please gove specifically where to add inline citations more. I have already added 9 inline citations . Isn't it enough? Sony P Thampi (talk) 15:49, 18 September 2023 (UTC)

@Sony P Thampi: the nine inline citations only equate to three unique sources, two of which are primary sources and do not establish notability. The remaining source may help to establish notability but more reliable, independent sources with WP:SIGCOV of the subject need to be added. Additionally, it is not the number of the inline citations that count, but how much unreferenced information there is. There are still many unreferenced paragraphs in the article. Try adding one inline citation to a reliable source in each paragraph and remove any paragraphs you cannot find references for. InterstellarGamer12321 (talk | contribs) 06:29, 19 September 2023 (UTC)

Draft:Archil Gelovani

Hello! I am writing an article about a modern producer of Georgian cinema. You rejected the first revision of the text on the grounds of the need to add more sources.

I really ask you to give a little more detailed commentary so that I could correct inappropriate parts of the article. I hope this is possible.

Here is the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Archil_Gelovani 87.116.163.255 (talk) 12:48, 7 September 2023 (UTC)

@Stroganov2009 and 87.116.163.255: this is a WP:BLP article, meaning that all statements and claims should be backed up with inline citations to reliable sources. When I reviews your article there were no inline citations, so all statements and claims were unreferenced. Currently, only the lead section has inline citations, with the body of the article consisting of entirely unreferenced claims. See WP:REFB and MOS:CITE for more information on how to add references properly. InterstellarGamer12321 (talk | contribs) 06:30, 8 September 2023 (UTC)

Thanks for your feedback on a page I created

Hello! Thank you for your useful feedback on the page I have been working on (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:British_Academy_of_Dramatic_Combat). All external links have now been removed from the body of the article, and the unsourced elements have been deleted; hope that is looking better. Please do let me know if there are other specifics that need to be rectified! Hallowed tallow (talk) 14:14, 9 September 2023 (UTC)

@Hallowed tallow: I have taken another look at the article and has definitely been improved. I would recommend adding more sources independent of the subject, as the article currently heavily relies on WP:PRIMARY sources, which do not establish notability and should only be used in a limited number of circumstances. InterstellarGamer12321 (talk | contribs) 17:10, 9 September 2023 (UTC)

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Draft:Sambhav Jain

Hello InterstellarGamer12321, Requesting you to please move Draft:Sambhav Jain to main space as he is a noted indian actor. He has noted roles in various noted projects and also has reliable news coverage. 11:25, 15 September 2023 (UTC) 122.173.29.204 (talk) 11:25, 15 September 2023 (UTC)

@122.173.29.204: the draft has currently not been submitted for AfC. Please submit your draft to Articles for Creation and wait for someone to review the draft and move it to mainspace. Also, why did you ask me in particular to review it? InterstellarGamer12321 (talk | contribs) 09:17, 16 September 2023 (UTC)

I have submitted it for review. and i asked you to review it because i saw you in active reviewer list. You are doing great work i appreciate your hard work. I contribute wikipedia very rare but i try to do my best if i can solve anything.

You can check the draft now and review if you feel he is notable.

Thank you

122.173.25.253 (talk) 13:48, 16 September 2023 (UTC)

@122.173.25.253: I currently have two concerns with the article:

• It was deleted a year ago at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Sambhav Jain. Give the best WP:THREE sources that indicate that Sambhav Jain passes WP:NACTOR.
• Do you have a conflict of interest or connection with the subject in any way? If so, please declare your connection.

Once these two issues have been answered I will accept the draft. InterstellarGamer12321 (talk | contribs) 15:29, 16 September 2023 (UTC)

• [1]1 2

3 these are the three best news coverage The New Indian Express, Hindustan Times and Times of India also he has good coverage in publication like The Hans India, National Herald and The Tribune.

• I don’t have a conflict of interest or any kind of connection with the subject.

Thank you

122.173.25.253 (talk) 17:18, 16 September 2023 (UTC)

@122.173.25.253: I have accepted the draft and it is now in mainspace. I would recommend copyediting the article to ensure that it has an encyclopaedic tone. InterstellarGamer12321 (talk | contribs) 17:52, 16 September 2023 (UTC)

request

@InterstellarGamer12321 can you move Draft:Kavi Sukanta metro station to mainspace. 122.187.144.98 (talk) 15:57, 22 September 2023 (UTC)

@122.187.144.98: I have taken a look at your draft. I will be willing to accept it if you can copyedit the prose, add references to the unreferenced paragraphs and fix the error in the infobox. InterstellarGamer12321 (talk | contribs) 17:30, 22 September 2023 (UTC)

All paragraphs are referenced and while making Beliaghata metro station, I noticed and discussed with an draft approver it's wikidata error you have to fix in wikidata.@InterstellarGamer12321 122.187.144.98 (talk) 05:15, 23 September 2023 (UTC)

See this revision https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Beliaghata_metro_station&oldid=1172371064 122.187.144.98 (talk) 05:23, 23 September 2023 (UTC)

For that map error it will be fixed if a page like this is made on wikidata https://m.wikidata.org/wiki/Q109968614 122.187.144.98 (talk) 05:24, 23 September 2023 (UTC)

@Mackensen bro last time you created the wikidata page for beliaghata metro station please make more for Hemanta Mukhopadhyay, kavi Sukanta, jyothirindra nandi station 122.187.144.98 (talk) 06:10, 23 September 2023 (UTC)

Actually the pages exists you just need to rename them @Mackensen https://www.wikidata.org/wiki/Q30632588 https://www.wikidata.org/wiki/Q30632590 https://www.wikidata.org/wiki/Q65090385 122.187.144.98 (talk) 06:23, 23 September 2023 (UTC)

A Wikidata item shouldn't link to a page that's still in the draft namespace. The script error will resolve itself once the page moves to the article namespace and gets linked up with its Wikidata item. It shouldn't be a blocker. Mackensen (talk) 12:23, 23 September 2023 (UTC)

@Mackensen but it's a blocker for the two pages in mainspace, the only draftspace is OK once moved to mainspace, but Hemanta Mukherjee metro station is renamed to Hemanta Mukhopadhyay metro station and Jyotirindra Nath Nandi is renamed to Jyotirindra Nandi metro station metro station where problem exists 122.187.144.98 (talk) 14:56, 23 September 2023 (UTC)

@InterstellarGamer12321 looks like page is ready in my opinion now for mainspace, for prose I lack that writing skills please edit yourself or ask one of your friend on wiki who is free. 122.187.144.98 (talk) 15:03, 23 September 2023 (UTC)

@122.187.144.98: there is currently a redirect at the mainspace title, which I have requested for speedy deletion so that the draft can be moved. InterstellarGamer12321 (talk | contribs) 15:48, 23 September 2023 (UTC)

Thanks a lot mate 122.187.144.98 (talk) 05:53, 24 September 2023 (UTC)