User talk:Holly Dae

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Ramesh (Persian Singer) (May 15)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

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Onel5969 ^{TT me} 13:50, 15 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Holly Dae, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Onel5969 ^{TT me} 13:50, 15 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ramesh (Persian Singer) (July 6)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Tseung Kwan O was:

This submission looks pretty good already, but a few areas still need some improvement. First of all, you can consider providing proof for your statements. When you claim that the subject involved is one of the best-selling singers in Persia, I expect evidence based on sources to back up this claim. Furthermore, after Early Life and Career, the sections are really short. You can consider integrating them into a single section, or adding more information to each section. Keep up the good work!

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Tseung Kwan O (talk) 11:28, 6 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ramesh (singer) (August 2)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Chris troutman was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

There's no evidence Ramesh charted or sold a gold record, which are basic requirements for musicians to be considered notable. You claim she was one of the best-known singers in 20th Century Persia, and you must mean Iran. Your citations for that claim are from Iranian.com, which is just some guy's website. It's not a reliable source. If I can't accept that source then I can't accept the claim and therefore can't accept the article.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Chris Troutman (talk) 08:07, 2 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Ramesh (singer) concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Ramesh (singer), a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:35, 2 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Ramesh (singer)

Hello, Holly Dae. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Ramesh".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. TKK! bark with me! 17:17, 3 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

January 2019

Hello, I'm Greyjoy. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, Cosmo Sheldrake, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. If you need guidance on referencing, please see the referencing for beginners tutorial, or if you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Greyjoy^talk 10:54, 16 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]