User talk:Hespeb

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Speedy deletion nomination of Paradise Garden, Howard Finster

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Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. This is a notice to inform you that a tag has been placed on Paradise Garden, Howard Finster requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section A3 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because it is an article with no content whatsoever, or whose contents consist only of external links, a "See also" section, book references, category tags, template tags, interwiki links, images, a rephrasing of the title, a question that should have been asked at the help or reference desks, or an attempt to contact the subject of the article. Please see Wikipedia:Stub for our minimum information standards for short articles. Also please note that articles must be on notable subjects and should provide references to reliable sources that verify their content.

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Paradise Garden (Georgia) (January 21)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by NewYorkActuary was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

The comment the reviewer left was:

The similarly-titled Paradise Garden, Howard Finster was speedy-deleted on January 15.

Not only does this submission read like an essay, much of its material is devoted to Howard Finster and not the Garden (and, as such, merely duplicates material in Finster's article). Also, there are no-inline citations, making it impossible to verify any particular statement here without reading through all of the general references.

Adding in-line citations is explained in WP:Referencing for beginners. When adding them, it will be helpful to use the {{cite web}} template. This template will make it easier to include all of the essential bibliographic detail in a standard format.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Paradise Garden (Georgia) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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NewYorkActuary (talk) 21:38, 21 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Hespeb, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! NewYorkActuary (talk) 21:38, 21 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:John Lonergan (artist) has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:John Lonergan (artist). Thanks! SwisterTwister talk 23:23, 28 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Paradise Garden (Georgia) (April 6)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Yashovardhan Dhanania was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

The comment the reviewer left was:

For the same reasons as before. No inline citations, reads like an essay. Try dividing it into sections and be more neutral

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Paradise Garden (Georgia) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk or on the reviewer's talk page.
You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Yashovardhan (talk) 08:15, 6 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: John Lonergan (artist) has been accepted

John Lonergan (artist), which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. Note that because you are a logged-in user, you can create articles yourself, and don't have to post a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer.

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Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 19:28, 27 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Ways to improve Paradise Garden (Georgia)

Hi, I'm Mduvekot. Hespeb, thanks for creating Paradise Garden (Georgia)!

I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. The external links can be converted into footnotes. See WP:CITE is you do not know how to do that.

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, you can leave a comment on my talk page. Or, for more editing help, talk to the volunteers at the Teahouse.

Mduvekot (talk) 15:30, 11 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Paradise Garden (Georgia) concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Paradise Garden (Georgia), a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 20:58, 24 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Paradise Garden (Georgia)

Hello, Hespeb. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Paradise Garden".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Boomer Vial^{Holla! We gonna ball!} 18:23, 20 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]