User talk:Harvey Logins2

Hello, I'm Beluga99. I wanted to let you know that one or more of your recent contributions to Lions_Clubs_International have been undone because they did not appear constructive. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. If you think a mistake was made, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks.

Your submission at Articles for creation: David Grainger (presenter) (April 29)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by AngusWOOF was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Need more secondary news sources about Grainger, not just bio profiles from the television channels. Please clean up sources, remove IMDb, linkedin, and goodreads

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AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 18:01, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Harvey Logins2! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 18:01, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

May 2019

Hello, I'm Wikipelli. I wanted to let you know that I reverted one of your recent contributions —specifically this edit to Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk— because it did not appear constructive. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. If you have any questions, you can ask for assistance at the Help desk. Thanks. Wikipelli ^Talk 14:00, 13 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: David Grainger (presenter) (May 13)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by AngusWOOF were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please integrate the sources to the article instead of leaving them at the bottom. Also remove the bullet list of other accomplishments, this should be converted either to prose and redone to Personal life or Other ventures. If it's hobbies then it goes in Personal life. If it's philanthropy and other businesses / organizations, then other ventures. But the way it stands, it reads like a resume.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:David Grainger (presenter) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:David Grainger (presenter), click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 15:55, 13 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:David Grainger (presenter) has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:David Grainger (presenter). Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 18:57, 5 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: David Grainger (presenter) has been accepted

David Grainger (presenter), which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
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Missvain (talk) 22:08, 6 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]