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January 2016

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Gary Rush (January 31)

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(t) Josve05a (c) 16:29, 31 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (January 31)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

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Onel5969 ^{TT me} 18:27, 31 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Gary Rush (February 2)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

You need to do a close read of wp:rs, which is the guidelines for reliable sources. In general, you are not using appropriate sources. His own writings are primary sources, as is the email discussion. You need writings that are ABOUT him. #2 seems to be a bibliography of some sort, and does not support notability for him. (Also do a close read of wp:n on notability.) Being in a speaker list does not confer notability, it only shows that he spoke at that event. Again, you need sources ABOUT him not BY him.

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LaMona (talk) 00:27, 2 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Conflict of Interest

Hello, Grush. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on Wikipedia, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a COI may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. In particular, please:

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Please familiarize yourself with relevant policies and guidelines, especially those pertaining to neutral point of view, sourcing and autobiographies. Thank you.

Your submission at Articles for creation: Gary Rush (February 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

I made some formatting and style changes. You do not have any references regarding his business or business activities, and those are the most important to have. They must be third-party and independent of him.

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LaMona (talk) 15:47, 3 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Gary Rush (February 4)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

You have ignored the conflict of interest notice on your talk page. This is not acceptable, User:Grush. Are you Gary Rush? If not, why are you using that name to create this article, as well as the article on his "invention" FAST? And note that one of your edits says: "(Corrected description - FAST was created by me, Gary Rush, IAF CPF)"

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LaMona (talk) 22:38, 4 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

COI discussion

Notice of Conflict of interest noticeboard discussion

This message is being sent to inform you that there is currently a discussion at Wikipedia:Conflict of interest/Noticeboard regarding a possible conflict of interest incident in which you may be involved. Thank you. LaMona (talk) 22:49, 4 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Deletion of FAST article

"A page existed with completely false information on it". Well, that's not true, is it? The article you created previously had been deleted after a discussion so there was nothing for you to correct. Conflicts of interest are, unfortunately, often invisible to those committing them. The fact is, you shouldn't be creating or editing a page about something that involves you so directly, as it is very difficult for you to abide by the neutral point of view policy. Deb (talk) 16:23, 5 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

There was an article prior to mine and it was completely false. I simply replaced it. It was deleted because I'm learning how to post here. I had posted the original article from Computerworld - copyright problem even though I wrote it. I removed it and worked to make it neutral. So - it is true that the previous one was wrong (not my previous attempt - the original one). I've looked at the policy - this article is not about me and I no longer sell the product - just simply trying to get the history right. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.38.53.188 (talk) 16:42, 5 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

By the way, the article mentioned above was about me - a bio - and I understand the COI. FAST is the only article I'm concerned with. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.38.53.188 (talk) 16:45, 5 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

The article mentioned above is more than about you - it is an autobiography, something that is highly discouraged. If you do understand the COI, then you understand that you must declare your COI on the talk page of the FAST article, and you must cease to edit it directly. You can request that suggested edits be done by non-involved editors. Those editors will determine if the edits are appropriate. LaMona (talk) 18:03, 5 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Facilitated Application Specification Techniques

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A tag has been placed on Facilitated Application Specification Techniques requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G12 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the article or image appears to be a clear copyright infringement. This article or image appears to be a direct copy from http://www.mgrconsulting.com/index.php/gary-rush-mgr-consulting-facilitator-training-facilitation. For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other web sites or printed material, and as a consequence, your addition will most likely be deleted. You may use external websites or other printed material as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences. This part is crucial: say it in your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing.

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I've removed the copyvio, tidied up what's left and left some notes on its talk page. —SMALL JIM 16:55, 5 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]