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This page is not unambiguously promotional, because... (your reason here) --Golfprowoman (talk) 14:04, 27 September 2024 (UTC) 1. Neutral Language: The article uses neutral and factual language without hyperbole or subjective descriptions. For example, phrases like "first Arab woman to become a professional golfer" and "first Arab woman to serve as a referee in golf" present her achievements in a straightforward manner.[reply]

2. Verifiable Achievements: Each claim made in the article is grounded in verifiable facts about her career, such as her professional status and significant milestones, which can be substantiated through reliable third-party sources.

3. Focus on Historical Context: The article emphasizes Mounya Amalou's role within the broader context of women in golf, particularly from the Arab world, rather than focusing solely on her personal accolades. This approach highlights her contributions to the sport and its development.

4. Absence of Promotional Statements: The article does not include any promotional statements or subjective opinions that might suggest an agenda to market or glorify Mounya Amalou. Instead, it aims to inform readers about her achievements and their significance within the sport.

5. Inclusion of Personal Life and Background: While the article provides some personal background, it does not dwell excessively on personal anecdotes or achievements unrelated to her professional career, maintaining focus on her contributions to golf.

6. Encouragement for Women in Sports: The article discusses her impact on encouraging other Arab women to participate in golf, which aligns with educational and informative goals rather than promotional ones.

7. Use of Reliable Sources: The intention is to cite reputable sources to support all claims made in the article. This focus on citation underscores the commitment to providing accurate information rather than engaging in self-promotion.

Contested deletion

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This page is not unambiguously promotional, because... (your reason here) --Golfprowoman (talk) 14:11, 27 September 2024 (UTC) 1. Neutral Language: The article uses neutral and factual language without hyperbole or subjective descriptions. For example, phrases like "first Arab woman to become a professional golfer" and "first Arab woman to serve as a referee in golf" present her achievements in a straightforward manner.[reply]

2. Verifiable Achievements: Each claim made in the article is grounded in verifiable facts about her career, such as her professional status and significant milestones, which can be substantiated through reliable third-party sources.

3. Focus on Historical Context: The article emphasizes Mounya Amalou's role within the broader context of women in golf, particularly from the Arab world, rather than focusing solely on her personal accolades. This approach highlights her contributions to the sport and its development.

4. Absence of Promotional Statements: The article does not include any promotional statements or subjective opinions that might suggest an agenda to market or glorify Mounya Amalou. Instead, it aims to inform readers about her achievements and their significance within the sport.

5. Inclusion of Personal Life and Background: While the article provides some personal background, it does not dwell excessively on personal anecdotes or achievements unrelated to her professional career, maintaining focus on her contributions to golf.

6. Encouragement for Women in Sports: The article discusses her impact on encouraging other Arab women to participate in golf, which aligns with educational and informative goals rather than promotional ones.

7. Use of Reliable Sources: The intention is to cite reputable sources to support all claims made in the article. This focus on citation underscores the commitment to providing accurate information rather than engaging in self-promotion.