User talk:Gbugga1/sandbox

Sources

The links don't point to the information you quote in the sandbox. If you indeed found the info in 2010 issues of the Parks & Recreation magazine, you should provide a fuller citation including the article titles and page numbers.

The NPRA website doesn't have issues of Parks & Recreation from 2010 on its website, but you can find them in the library catalog, which is what you should be using in the first place. Josef Horáček (talk) 00:31, 21 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your citations look great now. Go ahead and put them in the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 15:23, 25 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

The Lead

Your lead is excellent. Replace the semicolon in the last sentence of your lead with a comma. Once you post the lead, you should break up the rest of the article into sections. Give those sections titles ("Personal life," "The Jackson Advocate newspaper," and "Voting rights advocacy" may be good options). Josef Horáček (talk) 11:28, 26 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]