User talk:Fernanda1alvesk

Please don’t bite me, I’m a newbie!

I’m a university student in a Wikipedia Education class, and I’m currently learning how to contribute to Wikipedia.
I am approaching my subject in good faith.

If you have any concerns or questions, my tutor’s name is Carrolquadrio (talk · contribs). Thanks!

Please don’t bite me (Links to an external site.), I’m a newbie!

Jon Larsen and other issues

Hi Fernanda1alvesk, and welcome to Wikipedia. While I appreciate your efforts at expanding the Jon Larsen (Danish musician) article, there are some issues with your additions. The main ones are:

• A lot of it does not adhere to Wikipedia:NPOV, meaning there are many subjective statements. Just some examples: "The groups' electrifying performances that are energy-packed and well-rehearsed continue being a factor that has led to the enormous success of Volbeat." and "...by hard work and dedication to becoming an internationally acclaimed music group with fans worldwide, and that is the pride of the Danish people." There are many more, and in general the tone of the article is more promotional than encyclopedic. You could take a look at the Volbeat article, which is neutral and objective, to see the difference.
• The article contains very little information specific to Larsen himself; almost all of it is about Volbeat in general. One section with a general outline of his career with Volbeat is suitable for this page, but not the current amount of detail.

I hope this gives you an idea of how the article should be improved. If you need anything else, let me know. Lennart97 (talk) 18:21, 18 November 2020 (UTC)

Thank you Lennart97 for your feedback to this user, who is a student that was not given permission to move their material to Wikipedia for the reasons you have stated above. Apologies for the additional work this has created,I also note your comments below.Carrolquadrio (talk) 03:24, 6 December 2020 (UTC)

I've also reverted your edits at Alissa Bjerkhoel - could you explain these to me? They seem like disruptive editing. I also noticed that you added copyrighted material to History of modernisation theory and simply removed the feedback you received about this from your talk page (which is allowed, but makes me wonder whether you take it seriously). I think you should spend some time familiarising yourself with how to contribute to Wikipedia before making any further edits. Lennart97 (talk) 18:39, 18 November 2020 (UTC)

Some baklava for you!

GOOD LUCK! JJJ0404 (talk) 12:26, 19 November 2020 (UTC)