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Week 2/ Ryan1232378

I edited the LVMH article on Wikipedia to include information about LVMH's acquisition of Swiza, owner of L’Epée 1839, in June 2024. You can see the changes in the diff link. Through this process, I learned about LVMH's strategic acquisitions to enhance its luxury watch division and the importance of preserving historic craftsmanship.

Ryan1232378 (talk) 13:39, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

@Ryan1232378 Please review the Wikipedia policies training materials again related to the first two pillars of Wikipedia. The edit you made included too many buzzwords and terms that appeared like marketing language and did not appear to be written from a Neutral point of view. Additionally, some of what you contributed appeared too close to the actual sources you used, which some could challenge as plagiarism (please review this part of the training on this). Please edit what you wrote and then ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 11:22, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
Thank you for your feedback. I have revised the edit according to your suggestions, removing the excessive buzzwords and ensuring a neutral point of view. The revised content is in the following link: LVMH and the diff Ryan1232378 (talk) 06:10, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
Ryan1232378 (talk) 06:11, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
@Ryan1232378 Nice edits. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 15:56, 7 July 2024 (UTC)

Week 1 / Garnix L

Hi everyone, my name is Jialu Li, and I'm happy to join this interesting project. This week, I created a new Wikipedia account, completed training on Wikipedia policies, sandboxes, talk pages, and watchlists, and learned about the most basic wiki editing knowledge and precautions. Finally, I turned on notifications in my preferences."  ~~~~  " Garnix L (talk) 15:41, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

@Garnix L Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this assignment a helpful learning experience. Current with Week 1. FULBERT (talk) 16:52, 7 July 2024 (UTC)

Week 1 / Yl11406

Hi, all. This is Yl11406. I am new to Wikipedia, so I am trying to learn how to edit the posts on the website. Currently, I am a master’s student studying management and systems at NYU. Looking forward to participating in this project! ~~~~ Yl11406 (talk) 14:30, 6 July 2024 (UTC)

@Yl11406 Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this assignment a helpful learning experience. Current with Week 1. FULBERT (talk) 16:55, 7 July 2024 (UTC)

This week's article for improvement (week 28, 2024)

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Applied science

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Weekly Tasks

Week 1 / Zhilin0321

Hello everyone, I am Zhi Lin and you can call me Melody. I am glad to join this project and work with you! I created a new Wikipedia account and did all the training processes. I learned about how to edit articles and cite support resources. Also, I finished setting up my all preferences. "  ~~~~  " Zhilin0321 (talk) 11:42, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

@Zhilin0321 Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this assignment a helpful learning experience. Current with Week 1. FULBERT (talk) 18:10, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

This Month in Education: June 2024

This Month in Education

Volume 13 • Issue 6 • June 2024

In This Issue

Week 1 / zq2197

Hello, I just started my first assignment and this is my first time doing this. Zq2197 (talk) 10:14, 10 July 2024 (UTC)

@Zq2197 Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this assignment a helpful learning experience. Current with Week 1. FULBERT (talk) 12:42, 10 July 2024 (UTC)

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Week 1/ Mt5332

Hello, I just started my first assignment and i am doing this for the first time. I never knew that we could edit articles on Wikipedia. Mt5332 (talk) 18:14, 10 July 2024 (UTC)

@Mt5332 Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this assignment a helpful learning experience. Current with Week 1. FULBERT (talk) 10:27, 12 July 2024 (UTC)

Week 1 / ae2744

Hi All,

My name is Alejandro, I am excited to learn more about how to use Wikipedia, and learn more about editing and improving Wikipedia articles. Done with tasks from week 1 and looking forward to take on week 2.

~~~~ Ae2744 (talk) 00:57, 11 July 2024 (UTC)

@Ae2744 Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this assignment a helpful learning experience. Current with Week 1. FULBERT (talk) 10:28, 12 July 2024 (UTC)

Week 1 / Xuhang1204

Hello,

My name is Xuhang Zheng. I am excited to be a part of this course and look forward to learning more about Wikipedia editing and contributing to the community. This week, I have created my account, completed all the required training courses for Week 1, and adjusted my Wikipedia preferences as instructed. I hope it's not too late to catch up with the assignments from Week 1 Xuhang1204 (talk) 12:35, 11 July 2024 (UTC)

@Xuhang1204 Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this assignment a helpful learning experience. Current with Week 1. FULBERT (talk) 10:33, 12 July 2024 (UTC)

week 2 / yz10411

hi this is Joanna Zhao, I edited: Marketing and artificial intelligence in wikipedia. expand more details in the introduction part. this is the previous version I don't know whether you could see it: Marketing and artificial intelligence from this assignment I learned that we could use the resources online professionally. and I did more research on the topic which I interested in. looking forward to the next assignment. Yz10411 (talk) 23:55, 9 July 2024 (UTC)

Addition was uncited. But it was also merely cut'n'pasted (at best some was close-paraphrase) content from various (uncited) sources. I undid the edit. DMacks (talk) 04:26, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
@DMacks Thank you for the helpful feedback for my student. FULBERT (talk) 12:38, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
Glad to help. I'm not sure why so many pages of your students' have accumulated on my watchlist over the years:) I'd be happy to back off a bit if you (yourself, or plural your class) are feeling like I'm overly focused on them. DMacks (talk) 03:31, 11 July 2024 (UTC)
@DMacks I appreciate your help and suggestions. While I am trying to teach many people to use Wikipedia, having our community involved in this such as yourself demonstrates that this is not only a community effort but also that there are real people watching these articles, and as part of the ecosystem of free and open knowledge, this is as real as it can get. Thank you for your ongoing help, especially as you do not bite the newbies!! FULBERT (talk) 10:22, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
@Yz10411 Your edit was reverted; please see the feedback. Also, please do not do any more edits until we meet to discuss. FULBERT (talk) 12:38, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
thank you for the feedback do I need to start a new section/ message to re edit this or just begin week 3? Yz10411 (talk) 20:22, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
hello professor I start a new topic for week 2 thank you ! Yz10411 (talk) 05:26, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
@Yz10411 Great; will look for it. FULBERT (talk) 11:59, 13 July 2024 (UTC)

Week 2 / age497

Hello,

In the assignment for this week I made changes in the "ESG" article in Wikipedia. I made changes on the section of Firms where is talks about the implications of ESG in companies. I added information highlighting the financial challenges that small and medium-sized enterprises (SMEs) face when adopting ESG practices. Specifically, I noted that while large corporations have the resources to invest in sustainable technologies and practices, SMEs often struggle with the upfront costs associated with these initiatives. By doing this I learned the process on how to change/add information in articles in Wikipedia and the correct way to do it. Looking forward to Week 3.

Link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Environmental%2C_social%2C_and_governance&diff=1233816659&oldid=1228599242

~~~~

Ae2744 (talk) 01:52, 11 July 2024 (UTC)

@Ae2744 Did you see the follow-up edit that another editor did to your edit here, along with their edit summary? FULBERT (talk) 10:32, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
@Ae2744 Please give me your thoughts about what they wrote as a reply to me here, and then you will be complete with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 10:32, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
@FULBERT Thanks for your reply, I had not seen that follow-up edit. I believe that my edit does not explicitly say that the impact of ESG regulations on SMEs is a fact or something 100% certain, what I got from the source was that it can be more difficult for business with those characteristics to successfully cope with them, that is why I used words like "can" or "may". 200.89.87.150 (talk) 16:25, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
@Ae2744 Please ensure you are logged on when you reply, as your signature before was not your user name. OK, current with Week 2. Move on to Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 12:01, 13 July 2024 (UTC)

Week 2 / Yl11406

I edited the Head-up display article on Wikipedia addressing the development history of in-car HUD in 1999 and 2010. Here is the diff that I have made. Through this exercise, I learned how to combine the high-quality journal article I found with the related Wikipedia article. Yl11406 (talk) 14:57, 12 July 2024 (UTC)

@Yl11406 Nice edit. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 12:04, 13 July 2024 (UTC)

Week 2/ mt5332

I edited the Market capitalization - Wikipedia article, to include the relation between large caps and small caps based on growth rate and risk. Through this link you can see the difference. Market capitalization: Difference between revisions - Wikipedia. Through this process i learnt the inverse relationship between large caps and small caps for growth and risk. Mt5332 (talk) 20:01, 12 July 2024 (UTC)

@Mt5332 This is fine for now, and next time please add a new citation rather than reusing one that is already present in the article. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 12:12, 13 July 2024 (UTC)

Week 2/ Zhilin0321

Hello, I edit the Digital marketing article. Here is the diff link. I read the history of digital marketing and found some journals to make the history more complete. I learned about the development and strategies of digital marketing. I also learned how to add citations and view historical changes. Zhilin0321 (talk) 09:50, 13 July 2024 (UTC)

@Zhilin0321 Nice edit. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 12:18, 13 July 2024 (UTC)

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Week 2 / Garnix L

I edited the Volleyball on Wikipedia by adding the reference to the part of volleyball game rules change. Here is link diff .  Garnix L (talk) 15:30, 12 July 2024 (UTC)

@Garnix L Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week and then ping me here. Your edit should to include a sentence or two to express your contribution in context and demonstrate how it adds to the knowledge in the article before the citation. Also, write a sentence or two about what you learned in the process. Ping me here when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 12:08, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
Thank you for your feedback. There are some of my modifications, please let me know if have any suggestions.
  1. On contribution, by adding a reference to the official FIVB volleyball rules, I enhanced the credibility and accuracy of this description of rule changes, providing readers with an authoritative source of information.
  2. Through this process, I learned how to integrate primary sources with existing Wikipedia content, and how to properly cite official documents to support and verify information in the article. This practice not only improved the academic value of the article but also deepened my understanding of the evolution of volleyball rules
Garnix L (talk) 14:44, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
@Garnix L Nice edit. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 10:25, 14 July 2024 (UTC)

Week1/Swagsberyls

Hey class, my Wikipedia username is “Swagsberyls.” I am excited to be part of this Wikipedia project and look forward to contributing to the community. My interests include AI and its applications. I have completed all the training courses and adjusted my Wikipedia preferences as required. Thank you, Swagsberyls ~~~~ Swagsberyls (talk) 15:37, 13 July 2024 (UTC)

@Swagsberyls Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this assignment a helpful learning experience. Current with Week 1. FULBERT (talk) 10:27, 14 July 2024 (UTC)

Week2/Swagsberyls

Hey class. This week, I updated the "Robotaxi" Wikipedia page by adding recent developments in July 2024 to the "Testing and Revenue Service Timeline" section. Here is the diff. I learned the importance of accurate, up-to-date information and ensuring all edits are supported by reliable sources. Thank you, Swagsberyls ~~~~ Swagsberyls (talk) 15:47, 13 July 2024 (UTC)

@Swagsberyls Nice edit. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 10:28, 14 July 2024 (UTC)

Week 1 / Jb022801

Hi everyone. My name is Jessica Bagayogo and I am a student at New York University studying Management and Systems. I am eager to take on this wikipedia project as a part of the Research Process & Methodology course. My interests are AI and its applications on modern technology and the fashion industry. I have completed all trainings and adjusted my preferences. Thank you, Jb022801 (talk) 00:43, 14 July 2024 (UTC)

@Jb022801 Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this assignment a helpful learning experience. Current with Week 1. FULBERT (talk) 10:29, 14 July 2024 (UTC)

Week 2 / Jb022801

Hello everyone. I edited the SSENSE article about a e-commerce establishment that retails designer fashion and streetwear. I made two edits. The first edit was an addition to the text elaborating on SSENSE's overcoming of obstacles. The second edit consisted of including a citation. Here is the diff link [1]. Throughout this process I learned the importance of reliable sources because I noticed many of the references in this article to be from blogs. This resulted in the article being quite generic, broad, and ultimately unreliable. I will apply this lesson to my research project in class to ensure a reliable and comprehensive research paper. Thank you, Jb022801 (talk) 02:06, 14 July 2024 (UTC)

@Jb022801 Please assign yourself this article in the Dashboard and per the assignment add a sentence or two to your edit, as adding a citation alone is not as helpful as adding a sentence or two along with the citation. The citation itself is fine. Ping me here when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 10:32, 14 July 2024 (UTC)

Week 1 / Ha2875

Hi everyone, my name is Hongzhe Ao. In week 1, I created my Wikipedia account, learned what it is and how it works, and set up preferences as required by the course. I look forward to learn a lot from this project and contribute a bit to this community. Thanks! Ha2875 (talk) 03:34, 14 July 2024 (UTC)

@Ha2875 Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this assignment a helpful learning experience. Current with Week 1. FULBERT (talk) 10:33, 14 July 2024 (UTC)

This week's article for improvement (week 29, 2024)

Ambush of Polish partisans against Russian forces during the January Uprising, 1863
Hello, FULBERT. The article for improvement of the week is:

Ambush

Please be bold and help improve it!

Previous selections: Applied science • Mechanism (engineering)

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Week 2 / Ha2875

This week, I edited Data processing by adding in extensive reading that might help the readers to understand the corresponding concept. Link to the diff. It was a very interesting experience with playing with all the functionality of editting mode. I learned to use the sandbox to draft what I going to change, as well as how to edit the contents to make sure that they are more readable. Ha2875 (talk) 23:18, 14 July 2024 (UTC)

@Ha2875 Nice edit. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 08:54, 15 July 2024 (UTC)

Week 2/Yz9988

I edited the Pet adoption article on Wikipedia by adding the contents of the responsibilities of pet dog ownership after pet adoption. diff link is here. Yz9988 (talk) 22:13, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

@Yz9988 Your edit does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third-party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. As discussed in the assignment and class, always use a reliable source, such as an academic journal article or another high-quality reference. Avoid blogs, corporate websites, reviews, press releases, sources where we cannot determine author expertise or bias, and opinion pieces as they generally do not count as reliable sources. Please add a source to support your claim and then ping me here when done, and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 11:28, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
Thank you for your feedback. I have changed the edit of the Pet adoption article and here is the updated diff link. The source is here.
Holland KE. Acquiring a Pet Dog: A Review of Factors Affecting the Decision-Making of Prospective Dog Owners. Animals. 2019; 9(4):124. https://doi.org/10.3390/ani9040124https://doi.org/10.3390/vetsci8120332
Yz9988 (talk) 02:30, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
Sorry, here's the diff link. Yz9988 (talk) 02:32, 1 July 2024 (UTC)
@Yz9988 Please review the training video you took here and insert that citation into the article. Listing it here does not help the readers of the article. In addition, do not mention the author nor the title of the article; make your claim and then support it with your citation. Ping me here when finished and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 16:51, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
More significantly, Yz9988, carefully review the Wikipedia policy on copyright violation and your school's policy on plagiarism. I had to rev-del some of your edits. DMacks (talk) 12:30, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
@Yz9988 Please do not do any further edits until we discuss. FULBERT (talk) 14:54, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
Sorry about mistakes I made, I will review the training video and Wikipedia policy first. Yz9988 (talk) 22:27, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
@Yz9988 Thank you; let's discuss after class if possible. FULBERT (talk) 12:32, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
@Yz9988 We discussed this in class, and given that discussion, please email me the next edit you plan to do for this assignment, along with its citation, so I can review before you do the actual edit itself. Please do this before the end of tomorrow. FULBERT (talk) 10:16, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
Thank you. After receiving your feedback, I have edited the article by adding some contents related to the factors in pet adoption decision-making processes. Please find the diff here.Yz9988 (talk) 15:32, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
@Yz9988 Where is your citation? We talked about all edits needing a citation. Add one and ping me here. FULBERT (talk) 10:18, 14 July 2024 (UTC)
Citation added. diff link here.Yz9988 (talk) 16:26, 14 July 2024 (UTC)
@Yz9988 Nice edit. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 08:56, 15 July 2024 (UTC)
@Yz9988 I added the citation for you, and I am not sure why you added it to your own user page. Please review my video and the training for how to do this for Week 3. You do not need to make any other changes to this here as let's move on to Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 08:58, 15 July 2024 (UTC)
@DMacks Thank you for the helpful feedback, which is much appreciated. FULBERT (talk) 12:33, 10 July 2024 (UTC)

Week 3/ Ryan1232378

I edited the Artificial intelligence on Wikipedia. You can see the changes in the diff link.

I learned how to effectively integrate academic research into a Wikipedia article to enhance its content and credibility. By citing the study by Dhaigude and Lawande (2022), I demonstrated the practical benefits of AI in the credit scoring process, highlighting its role in improving financial decision-making and operational efficiency.

This exercise improved my understanding of the impact of AI in finance and the importance of reliable sources in public knowledge repositories. Ryan1232378 (talk) 10:48, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

@Ryan1232378 Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 10:58, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
@Ryan1232378 Your edit was reverted; please do not do any more edits until we discuss. FULBERT (talk) 14:53, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
@FULBERT I have assigned myself the article on the Wiki Edu Dashboard. I am now waiting for your feedback and further instructions. Thank you for your guidance.Ryan1232378 (talk) 15:54, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
I've now assigned myself the article on the Wiki Edu Dashboard. Please let me know if there are any further steps or if you need any additional information from me. Thank you!Ryan1232378 (talk) 15:52, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
@Ryan1232378 Let's discuss and clarify this after the next class. FULBERT (talk) 12:37, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
@Ryan1232378 We discussed this in class, and given that discussion, please email me the next edit you plan to do for this assignment, along with its citation, so I can review before you do the actual edit itself. Please do this before the end of tomorrow. FULBERT (talk) 10:16, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
@FULBERT Thank you for the reminder！I will complete the content within the next 12 hours and email it to you, including the citation. Ryan1232378 (talk) 10:20, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
@Ryan1232378 Is it done? FULBERT (talk) 10:19, 14 July 2024 (UTC)
@FULBERT Sorry, professor, it's not finished. I apologize for the delay in completing the editing tasks. I had acute gastroenteritis and a high fever for three consecutive days, which prevented me from working. I am now fully recovered and ready to complete the tasks. Thank you for your understanding. Ryan1232378 (talk) 10:26, 14 July 2024 (UTC)
@Ryan1232378 Glad you are feeling better. FULBERT (talk) 11:49, 14 July 2024 (UTC)
@FULBERT I finished! I edited the Artificial intelligence on Wikipedia. You can see the changes in the diff link.
I learned how to effectively integrate academic research into a Wikipedia article to enhance its content and credibility. By citing the study by Longbing Cao (2020), I demonstrated the practical benefits of AI in the finance sector, highlighting its role in improving risk management, market risk prediction, and quantitative trading strategies.
This exercise improved my understanding of the impact of AI in finance and the importance of reliable sources in public knowledge repositories. Ryan1232378 (talk) 10:46, 14 July 2024 (UTC)
@Ryan1232378 You have now added many buzzwords and adjectives that bring in a point of view per NPOV and as we discussed in class. Remove those buzzwords to make your entry more encyclopedic and ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 11:49, 14 July 2024 (UTC)
@FULBERT I have revised my entry to remove buzzwords and ensure it maintains a neutral point of view. Here is the updated version. Here is the new Diff. Ryan1232378 (talk) 11:57, 14 July 2024 (UTC)
@Ryan1232378 Nice edit now. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 09:02, 15 July 2024 (UTC)
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