User talk:Endroit/Japanese pens and stationery/Archive1

I like this

Call me easily amused but this is why I like Wikipedia. Article like this about the finer and more obscure things in Japan! Shadowrun 23:16, 6 October 2006 (UTC)

...Obscure? Whatever. Anyway, yeah, this reads too much like an advertisement. Someone should change it. ShinjiPG 17:18, 29 November 2006 (UTC)

Will this article talk about all Japanese Pens in general, or just pens that are not available in other markets, unless imported? SentouYogensha 08:51, 24 March 2007 (UTC)

Written like an advertisement?

it's definitely OK (not too advertise-ish) Sorent 19:05, 18 April 2007 (UTC)

Previous versions of the article were, it's less so now. LDHan 10:03, 19 April 2007 (UTC)

Though this article could use a once-over for layout, I found it informative and hardly coercive in its presentation of the various pens. Numerous brands are represented in any case. 130.102.42.97 08:59, 19 April 2007 (UTC)

Removed the bolding on the list of common pens/pencils. I think thats the only "advertising" language in the article. Unless someone disagrees, or has a concern about other language, I'll remove the tag in a week —Preceding unsigned comment added by Brinlong (talk • contribs) 18:34, 14 January 2008 (UTC)

Added Brush Pens - discuss

As an Iron Chef tragic, I had to have a brush pen - never seen anything like it in "the west". Can anyone else add some other makers?

Thoglette 12:14, 12 November 2007 (UTC)

Tagged for speedy

I don't think it quite reads like an ad, but it isn't the prettiest article either. Someone ought to fix...I would, but I'm helpless about this kind of thing. ♠PMC♠ 19:00, 24 January 2008 (UTC)