User talk:ETB44
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[edit]Hello, ETB44, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:29, 19 January 2016 (UTC)
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[edit]Hi, ETB44 -- welcome to Wikipedia! As Ian mentioned, the Teahouse is a great resource for new editors. But did you know that Wikipedia also has an extensive help library for common questions? Of course, if you run into a question or problem, you're always welcome to get in touch with me either by email or on my talk page. Happy editing! Fraudoktorkatie (talk) 14:37, 27 January 2016 (UTC)
Peer Review
[edit]Eric, I saw that your article was featured on the Year of Science WikiEdu Blog, so well done on that! And kudos on choosing such an interesting topic to add input to. I like the flow of the article and how it's organized. I think you chose the appropriate information to include and relayed it in such a manner that is not too wordy and overwhelming. I don't think you should feel like you'd lose credibility by using personal stories/events from the book. I think that you have room in each category (or even a new category) to expand on her personal beliefs and accomplishments as long as you do it in a neutral manner. You should pull some stories or interesting events from the book that helped shape her medical career, although short-lived. I also think you can expand more on what occurred in her life following her imprisonment, if you have the information and sources. Apart from that, your draft was put together very nicely and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! Mlgeorge925 (talk) 01:00, 5 April 2016 (UTC)
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[edit]Hi Eric! I really like your rough draft. I thought you did an excellent job of formulating accurate and interesting information for this article. It was a good choice for an article topic in my opinion. You have a very well in-depth presentation on each section. If at all possible, I would just recommend expanding on her life after the war. If you have the sources and accurate information, I think it would be beneficial to expand that post-war section. If you can use the information from the biographical book to further expand on her history, I would recommend doing that. Otherwise, I feel like you have a great start on your draft. It was well thought out and well drafted. You have a good start to it, keep up the good work! Kwilcox25 (talk) 01:18, 5 April 2016 (UTC)