User talk:Dshim

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Hello, Dshim, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:

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I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Please sign your messages on talk pages using four tildes (~~~~); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Wikipedia:Questions, ask me on my talk page, or ask your question on this page and then place {{help me}} before the question. Again, welcome! Johnuniq (talk) 23:09, 30 March 2012 (UTC)

Electronic commerce

Thanks for your edit at Electronic commerce, however I had to remove it. One minor but important issue is that "Recent development" has no meaning in an article—what would that mean to someone reading the text in a year or a decade from now? More important however, is that even though the addition was pretty obviously true, it is in the form of commentary (an opinion). Since anyone can edit here, opinions have to be kept out, and the verifiability policy requires that significant text have a reliable source. If you have any questions, the WP:HELPDESK is a good place. Johnuniq (talk) 23:09, 30 March 2012 (UTC)

Message from JessieRoseLi

Hello Julie

Hello,

My name is Jessie Li. I'm here to give you some help in understanding how to get work done in Wikipedia.

I am an undergraduate student in Psychology and English at Davidson College. I edited Wikipedia articles last semester as part of the course Cognitive Psychology. I worked on the article "Global Precedence," and I was able to nominate my article for a "Did You Know" recognition. I found the assignment effective in helping me learn about the topic of the article I edited, the culture and norms of Wikipedia, and writing articles from a neutral point of view. I have learned some valuable lessons while completing my assignment and I will be glad to offer advice based on what I learned.

Please let me know if you have any questions, and I will do my best to help you work through them. I look forward to working with you!

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InstructorCommentBot (talk) 01:10, 6 April 2012 (UTC) on behalf of JessieRoseLi (talk)

Message from JessieRoseLi

Hi Julie,

Certainly. Please let me know if you have any questions and I will try my best to help you. Good luck refining your points!

Jessie

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InstructorCommentBot (talk) 17:18, 9 April 2012 (UTC) on behalf of JessieRoseLi (talk)