User talk:Dramirez811/sandbox
Hello!
You did a great job, but there are a few mistakes I noticed.
First, for the sentence, "This was done by handling diazomethane in 1-cm3 quantities which generated a beam of CH-2 anion." I think that you need to add a comma in between quantities and which. So it should be, "This was done by handling diazomethane in 1-cm3 quantities, which generated a beam of CH-2 anion."
Next, where are you getting all of your information about Lineberger's awards and research from?? You definitely need to cite your sources.
Lastly, I think that you need to make some sort of connection between the research that he did in 1975 and one of the awards that he had won. For example, I think that you're talking about how Lineberger won the "Herbert P. Broida Prize in Atomic and Molecular Spectroscopy or Chemical Physics, American Physical Society, 1981" award?
- Nathaniel Szeto
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