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I need to edit this article in sandbox

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Hi David,

I need to edit this article in Sandbox. then i will add in the Wikipedia page. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Prathap pugal (talk • contribs) 12:53, 30 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I look him up. He is the real deal, dave! You should check Luke Shen-Tien Chi out. I found his e-mail spokenologyatoutlook.com — Preceding unsigned comment added by 223.104.177.151 (talk) 23:39, 1 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 14:00:41, 30 August 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by 209.60.145.161

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I still don't understand why this hasn't been accepted. I have included several reliable sources such as Billboard, Grammys and Essence.com, and the album does have multiple singles on Billboard gospel charts. Please advise, thank you! 209.60.145.161 (talk) 14:00, 30 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi 209.60.145.161 . Perhaps you can help me out. Can you tell me which of the criteria in WP:BAND that has been satisfied, and a provide reliable source that shows it? Thanks David.moreno72 04:31, 31 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 16:58:14, 30 August 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by Sports0516

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Hi David...I took your advice and made some additions. Thanks for your help!

Sports0516 (talk) 16:58, 30 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Sports0516. Your welcome. I have made some small changes which will hopefully make the submission successful. One of those was to remove the Wikipedia citation as Wikipedia itself is not considered a reliable source. Thanks David.moreno72 04:42, 31 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Could you please help me to edit page

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Hi David, Yesterday I was editing the page of National University of Kaohsiung, however, it was been deleted ><" I work in this university, and our supervisors want me to make the information complete. So, could you please help me to edit this page?

Teresa 高韻嘉 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 140.127.232.252 (talk) 00:55, 1 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi 140.127.232.252. I would strongly advise that you do not make any further edits to the page as you have already shown a tendency to plagiarise and ignore warnings. I would highly recommend that you speak to your supervisors and ask them to select someone else to perform the task. Someone who will take heed of warnings and who is experienced and competent enough to write in a neutral tone without having to copy and paste. Thank-you David.moreno72 01:18, 1 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Teenagerss Battle the Thing

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Sir,

I just created the page so differentiate between the original movie, the new movie named "Curse of bigfoot" I posted 3 references for my information at the bottom of the page. This is simply for a school project of expanding on a "stub." I posted 3 references, I do not create wikipedia pages, nor edit them. I am simply trying to get an A while expanding the redirect page of this movie.

Joshua Gore — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2A03:4A80:3:43D:43D:3C92:E966:F9B9 (talk) 02:43, 1 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi 2A03:4A80:3:43D:43D:3C92:E966:F9B9. The page that you created used unreliable references, namely Amazon, IMDB, and a blog. If you really want to get an A, I suggest that you read this. Thank-you. David.moreno72 02:48, 1 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Spokenology

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Hello David, Can you pleased read the references of Beijing Review magazine to approve the article. I'm sorry that I'm very poor work on the editing Luke Shen-Tien Chi. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 223.104.177.243 (talk) 08:24, 1 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

09:10:58, 1 September 2016 review of submission by Nareshgarg84

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Request on 09:20:30, 1 September 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by Nareshgarg84

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Hey David,

Could you please guide us in making our article as per wikipedia guidelines.We have provided as many trustworthy independent sources for the submitted page.

Would request your support in order to help us improve upon the same. Nareshgarg84 (talk) 09:20, 1 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Nareshgarg84. I've had a go at improving your article. I've removed the material that is unrelated. It's now up to you to provide 3rd party sources, such as news articles and the like to establish notability. Cheers. David.moreno72 09:31, 1 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Declined speedy

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Information icon Hi David.moreno72. Thank you for your work on patrolling pages and tagging for speedy deletion. I'm just letting you know that I declined your deletion request for Good students of fycs, a page that you tagged for speedy deletion, under criterion A3 because the criterion you used or the reason you gave does not cover this kind of page. Maybe you clicked the wrong button there, but a bland stub about some students at an unclear school being hardworking isn't "blatant and obvious misinformation", and I can't see why it would need courtesy blanking. Please take a moment to look at the suggested tasks for patrollers, criteria for speedy deletion, and particularly, the section covering non-criteria. Such pages are best tagged with proposed deletion or proposed deletion for biographies of living persons, or sent to the appropriate deletion discussion. Thanks!--McGeddon (talk) 09:23, 1 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi McGeddon. Yeah, It was supposed to be no context instead vandalism. We'll chalk that up to a fat finger shall we. Cheers David.moreno72 09:28, 1 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

23:42:50, 1 September 2016 review of submission by 223.104.177.151

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Dave, please help Luke Shen-Tien Chi article! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 223.104.177.151 (talk) 23:41, 1 September 2016 (UTC) please help David.[reply]

If possible maybe you can take some time edit yourself about Luke Shen-Tien Chi. If you can do it better. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 223.104.177.151 (talk) 23:35, 1 September 2016 (UTC) Spokenology ideas is a published work by the new author. Book number exist is the approve of work - 978-7-302-44935-5. I think merriam-webster dictionary did take into account because territory area. However within China the evidence is great. Beijing Review also back the author work. Please approval the article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 223.104.177.151 (talk) 23:32, 1 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@223.104.177.151: You need to provide references to show that the subject is notable. Thank-you David.moreno72 02:09, 7 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

undo correcting wrong word 'consistent'

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Hi Dave,

I'm the bastard who fixed a simple mistake on your page ('Domestic violence against men'). In case you don't want that error to persist I'll quote that page so it becomes apparent.

""" /* Gender symmetry */ The theory that women perpetrate IPV at roughly the same rate as men has been termed "gender symmetry." ...

/* Criticism */

Many critics have rejected the research cited by men's rights activists and dispute their claims that such violence is gender symmetrical ...

Gender symmetry is also consistent [sic] with government findings. According to government statistics from the US Department of Justice, male perpetrators constituted 96% of federal prosecution on domestic violence. Another report by the US department of Justice on non-fatal domestic violence from 2003-2012 found that 76 percent of domestic violence was committed against women and 24 percent were committed against men. """

The fact that "male perpetrators constituted 96% of federal prosecution on domestic violence" hardly appears to be consistent with the notion that IPV is committed by both sexes (and or genders) at "roughly the same rate." — Preceding unsigned comment added by 138.25.67.106 (talk) 01:12, 2 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi 138.25.67.106, and thanks for your comments. After reading your explanation it does appear that the use of the word 'consistent' is incorrect. That being said, I think that it could be more clearly explained. Perhaps a better sentence might read 'Gender asymmetry is also consistent with government findings'. If you are happy with the proposed change, I will be more than happy to make the change myself, or if you make it, I will ensure that it remains. Thank-you David.moreno72 02:08, 2 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

S. Michael Hudson

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Dave - I am following up on a submission done by a summer intern at Marian University who said the submission was rejected for lack of cites/references. I have attempted add some that I think appropriate, but when I transferred the text the footnote notations dropped off. I have again tried to add these in the text using the "cite" on the toolbar, but my have botched it up again. If thes cites are not in the correct format please advise and I'll work on them. Thanks - Mike SMhud — Preceding unsigned comment added by SMHud (talk • contribs) 17:41, 2 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 15:48:26, 3 September 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by SMHud

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SMHud (talk) 15:48, 3 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I had submitted an article (S. Michael Hudson) and received the note below. It is not clear from the note if the problem with the submission is that the footnotes did not appear in the text or if there is some issue with the standard level of the citations. I have since added the notation in the text <Ref.#> . How do I find out if the citations meet standards? I have attempted to communicate with David.moreno72 who was kind to offer help, but am not sure I’ve done that correctly. Thanks. – SMHud SMHud (talk) 15:48, 3 September 2016 (UTC) The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you Thanks. – SMHud SMHud (talk) 15:48, 3 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi SMHud. Before you resubmit, I think you should read this. Thank-you. David.moreno72 16:00, 3 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

David - Ms. Tayler Wilson a Communication student and summer intern at Marian University was given the task of creating an article providing information on me for the University where I am on the Board of Trustees. She did not complete the task she reported due to her lack of credible references. She contacted me and I have dug our references in the public domain for the brief biographical description she had provided. She has left the assignment. Do I need to get someone else to submit this (assuming it meets standards now)? SMHud SMHud (talk) 16:23, 3 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

David – I as I noted am trying to fix a submission on me by an intern at Marian University during the summer. It was rejected for lack of proper references. I made a submission (s. Michael Hudson) with cites to see if I could provide adequate references. If I can get an OK I’ll return the submission to Marian since I can’t do an autobiographical submission. How do I find out if the references meet standards? Thanks SMHud SMHud (talk) 17:37, 6 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Nathalie Saba

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Hi David, Hope this finds you well. I work with Sony Music Middle East and have been asked to update our artist's wikipedia. Could you kindly refrain from deleting the edits? I am more than happy to answer your queries.

Thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 176.204.73.113 (talk) 17:56, 3 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi 176.204.73.113. I have reverted your changes as they violate a number of key Wikipedia policies. Also, since you declared a conflict of interest, I would also very strongly suggest that you create an account so that you can formally declare your conflict of interest. Before reverting or making any other further edits, I would very strongly advise that you read the following. WP:EL, WP:RS, WP:BIO, WP:BLP, WP:NPOV, so that you do not violate them again. May I also remind you that repeated violations of Wikipedia policies may lead to a blocking of your editing privileges. Thank-you David.moreno72 02:28, 4 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

19:20:44, 3 September 2016 review of submission by Eilida Riley

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The article was declined because of inline citations. The content is all original and not cited from another source so there isn't any citations which means somewhere I misunderstood and filled something out wrong. I do have references for the reader to gather further information about the content of my article. Did I place those references in the wrong place? Am I allowed to have them?

Hi, and thanks for your comments. Unfortunately, your article is not what Wikipedia is about, that is, it is not encyclopedic content, but rather a fictional short story, and promotion to your webpage, For more information regarding Wikipedia policies, please see WP:NOTESSAY and WP:PROMO. Thank-you David.moreno72 02:46, 4 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Erroneous revert

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See here I reverted back. —Justin (koavf)❤T☮C☺M☯ 13:27, 4 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. David.moreno72 13:30, 4 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 14:13:10, 4 September 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by 197.254.105.42

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I need to submit the profile of the following woman Ann Mutave Kioko

The only reference I have is http://africoff.org/ann-mutave-kioko/

197.254.105.42 (talk) 14:13, 4 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

13:47:40, 5 September 2016 review of submission by Babs Appels

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I made proper references and footnotes on the article David, is the article confirming the wiki-rules now? He's a famous concuctor who should be on Wiki. I would like to link the https://fi.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sigvards_K%C4%BCava site with this English one. Could you help me with that? Kind regards, Babs

Request on 19:15:30, 6 September 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by Meshellerenee

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Good afternoon!

The article I've submitted for creation was declined with a reference to WP:EL, which I understand is external links. Would you please provide more information on what changes need to be made for creation? Thank you! Meshellerenee 19:15, 6 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Meshellerenee. You need to remove the external links that are present in the body of the article. They are only permitted in the 'External Links' section. Thank-you David.moreno72 01:46, 7 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

19:28:04, 6 September 2016 review of submission by Ralphscheider42

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I have added numerous 3rd party references to substantiate the article. I would appreciate a re-review please.

Many thanks

@Ralphscheider42: I've had a quick look and there seems to be some problems. Some of your references are not reliable, and some of them are Google searches, which are not permitted. You will need to fix those. Thanks David.moreno72 02:00, 7 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Regarding the Page "Byju's - The Learning App" page creation

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Hi David,

The page created was for the company, and the app is it's mainstream product. If there is any confusion, I would like to change the Article Topic as just "Byju's". I am not able to do so, please help me on the same. — Preceding unsigned comment added by AlwaysBusy (talk • contribs) 08:06, 7 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Regarding Draft:Angular Correlation of Electron Positron Annihilation Radiation

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Thank you for reviewing the article Draft:Angular Correlation of Electron Positron Annihilation Radiation. You said the references were not correctly formated. I'm sorry, but I don't see what you mean. Could you perhaps give me an example. Perhaps you were confused because Further Reading section was previously titled Bibliography (which is obviously wrong). Thank you for your help! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hinkeldörnchen (talk • contribs) 11:59, 7 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Hinkeldörnchen. I've fixed the first reference so that you can see what needs to be done. It's up to you to do the rest. BTW, Great article, Cheers. David.moreno72 12:30, 7 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for you help and for the Compliment. You were right the formating went wrong. I did the corrections. In my preview it always showed up correctly. Cheers — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hinkeldörnchen (talk • contribs) 13:27, 7 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

15:39:56, 7 September 2016 review of submission by Meshellerenee

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Good morning, All external links have been removed from the body. Please let me know if there are any additional changes required. Thank you!Meshellerenee (talk) 15:39, 7 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Meshellerenee. You still need to follow the advice given in your help desk request, and, there are still external links, and, the external links section is not formatted correctly, and, as per the help desk comment, the references are not reliable, and, you need a reliable reference that is able to show notability per WP:AUTHOR. and, you meed to follow the WP:BOLDTITLE. Get those done first. Thanks David.moreno72 16:19, 7 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Why my Page has been rejected

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Hi David,

Im new to Wiki. Created this link after going thru the details. why is it rejected then. pls also reply in minakshyrath@gmail.com — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mogulinterior (talk • contribs) 16:04, 8 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Mogulinterior. The page that you have created consists of a single link, which would if published, meet the criteria for speedily deletion per WP:A3. I also see that your very first edit was reverted for being spam. I also notice that your username might be a violation of the username policy per WP:CORPNAME. Before making any further edits I recommend that you read this and WP:SPAM and WP:U. Thank-you. David.moreno72 05:22, 9 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

20:16:19, 8 September 2016 review of submission by Ledziana

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Hi,

Was wondering how we could best verify our artist page since it was declined. Asking because we cross-referenced with a bunch of sources outside of our own web page, but it was still declined and we modeled it after similarly-minded (working) photographers. I have already researched all of what you sent in terms of reasons for declining our page, but maybe you can offer some specifics if your time allows.

Thanks

Ledziana (talk) 20:16, 8 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Ledziana. The page was declined as it did not meet the notability requirements as set out in WP:ARTIST. The closest claim I could see was '(d) is represented within the permanent collections of several notable galleries or museums.', but as the subject has been added to only one collection, the criteria has not yet been met. Also, I am concerned that there may be a undeclared conflict of interest when you mentioned 'our artist'. Until these deficiencies are resolved it is unlikely that the page will be accepted. Thank-you David.moreno72 05:11, 9 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

05:58:20, 9 September 2016 review of submission by 5h6y7u

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Patent citation error corrected on Draft:Intelligence_Engine

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Thank you for your help on my intelligence engine draft. I have converted all three patent references to use the official Template:Cite_patent format. They appear to be working as intended! Jclayc (talk) 00:39, 11 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Jclayc. Great work. There is just one last, minor issue. If you could add a couple a categories to the page I will then be happy to approve. Thanks. David.moreno72 02:20, 11 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done! Thanks again Jclayc (talk) 16:22, 11 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Tim Peake

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Hello

I have your message about deleting my sentence about Tim Peake being given the honour of Freedom of the City of his hometown, Chichester. I am a Chichester City Councillor and at the time that the honour was agreed by the Council, I was Deputy Mayor of Chichester.

I am not sure how to add a citation but the Council minute confirming this is at http://chichestercity.gov.uk/abd/wp-content/uploads/2015/05/185-Council-Minutes.pdf

Is this enough to reinstate the sentence.

Many thanks

Trevor Tupper — Preceding unsigned comment added by Trevortupper (talk • contribs) 14:05, 12 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Trevortupper. I've reinstated your edit, with a suitable reference. Cheers. David.moreno72 14:27, 12 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 11:27:46, 13 September 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by Nbio-UniHeidelberg-Germany

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Hi, I've updated the article and would be glad to get your feedback.

Nbio-UniHeidelberg-Germany (talk) 11:27, 13 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

01:11:52, 15 September 2016 review of submission by Dearjohnph

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Hello there! I am not specifically asking for a re-review but I'm hoping to learn more on how to be an effective contributor here in Wikipedia. May I get specific advice from you why my contribution was rejected? I based my contribution from a couple of similar entities added here on Wikipedia


--Geh edit (talk) 15:20, 15 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi David, I have update the info for Michael Pawlyn. Are there still errors? Many thanks for your help. Geh edit (talk) 15:20, 15 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Michael Pawlyn

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Hi David, I have updated the info for Michael Pawlyn. Are there still errors? Many thanks for your help. Geh edit (talk) 15:21, 15 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Geh edit. Yes, there are still errors. What you need to do before leaving me a message is to actually test them out yourself. You can do that by clicking on the inline number. If it doesn't do anything, it is broken. Thank-you David.moreno72 15:24, 15 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

ok thanks Geh edit (talk) 15:25, 15 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Hi David,

I've checked through the links and they seem to be ok. Is there anything in particular that is not working. Thank you for taking the time to help.

Best,

KellyGeh edit (talk) 15:31, 15 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Geh edit I have just rechecked the inlines and they do not work. It should be obvious that [[# edn1|[i]]] is not a reference. Please read WP:REFB. David.moreno72 15:38, 15 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Hi David, I'm sorry I have only just got my head round what was wrong. I think I have now sorted the problem. Thank you for taking the time to check it for me. It is appreciated. Best, Kelly Geh edit (talk) 16:31, 15 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi David, I've looked through the article. There is a random 1. at the top of the References that I can't get rid of ... can you help? Thank you Kelly Geh edit (talk) 20:39, 15 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you

Geh edit (talk) 10:24, 16 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

ARTICLE ON MUHAMMAD KHAWAS KHAN GOLRA

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RESPECTED EDITOR, WIKEPEDIA Draft Article Link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Muhammad_Khawas_Khan_Golra — Preceding unsigned comment added by Zulfi799 (talk • contribs) 05:15, 16 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Sir, Reference subject Articles Dated August 22, 2016 and September 6, 2016 both rejected by your esteemed website due to non authentic references. The references given in the Article are authentic and the Article has been prepared from a thesis of Mr Zulfiqar Ali Shah, a student of masters whose thesis was accepted by University of Peshawar(Pakistan). The link of the University of Peshawar is http://pscpesh.org/index.php/publications/list-of-theses. The name of said thesis appears at S#80 of list of thesis. No further references are available on line as nobody has ever attempted to upload works of Muhammad Khawas Khan on any website. The reason is that the village of Muhammad Khawas Khan is in a far flung rural area and his progeny is not competent and educated enough to know the importance of his works. I being one of his co-villager has noticed that his works are still in the dark and would be lost very soon if not preserved through your renowned website. The replies from your side show that you preserve only those information which are already available on any site. But what about those which have never been uploaded by anybody?I am a responsible officer of higher rank in Khyber Pakhtunkhwa Judiciary and am presently serving as District & Sessions Judge in Khyber Pakhtunkhwa Judicial Academy Peshawar as Senior Director(Research & Publications).Whatever is written in the Article is authentic and I write the Article with full responsibility. If you have any further query you can contact me on the email ID given at the foot of this message. If you desire we may send you the hard copy/scanned copy of the thesis mentioned above as no soft copy is available due to its being old in time. Yours Sincerely, Niaz Muhammad Khan , District & Sessions Judge/Senior Director (Research & Publications) Khyber Pakhtunkhwa Judicial Academy Peshawar. Preceding unsigned comment added by Zulfi799 (talk • contribs) 05:13, 16 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Zulfi799. I'm sorry but a list of thesis is not a reliable source. May I instead recommend that you create your own website, say a blog. This is a good place here. That way you won't be encumbered with any of the strict policies of Wikipedia. Thank-you David.moreno72 08:10, 16 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

13:16:09, 16 September 2016 review of submission by Iamves

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Hello, please tell us what is needed to compete the wiki page for The Bas Seed. The distributor expected this to be up by now. What is required?

@Iamves:. Can you tell me which criteria has been meet in WP:BAND and provide a reliable source which can verify it. Also, it would seem that you have an undisclosed conflict of interest. If so, please read WP:COI. Thanks David.moreno72 15:30, 16 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Greg Ouellette

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Hi David I just wanted to make contact with you. My post for Greg Ouellette was denied unfortunately. I was hoping something could be done to make a change in this regard. I understand that Wikipedia has certain guidelines they use for each subject but I wanted to see if their could be some grey lining in this situation. Greg is considered one of the best division 1 college tennis players in history and was successful on the pro tour winning 5 professional titles and a Pan American bronze medal which reached him to 250 in the world. One of the guidelines to being accepted as a "notable tennis athlete" on Wikipedia is playing in an ATP professional event, singles or doubles. There are countless times throughout the year when players with no ranking whatsoever enter the doubles tournaments onsite of these events and get in because of a lack of participants. These people are considered qualified by Wikipedia. Although that hasn't happened for Greg due to scheduling issues, there would be no one with a back ground in tennis who say that Greg is not a notable athlete in the sport of tennis. I hope this text to you will an be considered and acted upon. All the best! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sports0516 (talk • contribs) 05:44, 17 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Sports0516. Can you show me which criteria for inclusion has been satisfied in WP:NTENNIS and provide a reliable source which can verify it. Thanks David.moreno72 08:26, 17 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi David,

Once again thank you for your time. Here are a few recent topics Greg has brought up about about the sport of tennis and its direction. Greg was recently recognized internationally concerning thoughts he put out regarding the sport of tennis and its development. There were many articles published recently. Here are a few of them.

https://translate.google.com/translate?hl=en&sl=it&u=http://www.tenniscircus.com/circuito-atp/ouellette-difende-lorenzi-merita-piu-rispetto/&prev=search

https://translate.google.com/translate?hl=en&sl=it&u=http://www.livetennis.it/post/251242/greg-ouellette-in-difesa-di-paolo-lorenzi/&prev=search

https://translate.google.com/translate?hl=en&sl=it&u=http://sportivissimo.me/news/tennis/greg-ouellette-difesa-paolo-lorenzi_2803059&prev=search

https://translate.google.com/translate?hl=en&sl=it&u=http://www.tennisworlditalia.com/news/news/Brevi/42908/greg-ouellette-portate-rispetto-per-lorenzi-critiche-verso-di-lui-danneggiano-il- tennis-/&prev=search (Sports0516 (talk) 03:24, 6 October 2016 (UTC))[reply]

Fireborn (Heights of Power, #1)

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Hi David,

Bruce here, how are you? I've re-submitted a wiki page for the book Fireborn, and appreciate all your feedback in getting it up to a standard to be accepted by wikipedia. I came across these books at Dublin Comic Con and really liked them, but found it strange that there was no wiki page for them, nearly every other book has one so I thought I might try my hand. Just started with Fireborn, but hope to write one for all the other books as well eventually. I've tried to find more external sources for the book and the author, but please let me know if there is more that I need to do, etc

Thanks for your help! 

- Bruce  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bruce Walker 1984 (talk • contribs) 10:57, 18 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Dear David

I wrote an article about English E.Teach project and even provided references from one of the reliable newspapers of India - Times of India. It has still been rejected and the reason mentioned is insufficient resources. Can you please re-look at it. This is a very effective project in the Maharashtra state of India and have affected lives of more than a lac of children - this needs to be noticed and acknowledged and given a presence on wikipedia.

Please guide me what should I do ?

Thanks

Shailee — Preceding unsigned comment added by 175.100.149.3 (talk) 07:14, 19 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

15:48:04, 19 September 2016 review of submission by I'm Tony Ahn

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Hi David, thanks for the review. Le Matin, The Times of London, and ABC News are not tabloids, though. Did they not help?

How about the following non-tabloid sources?

Thanks for your help. I'm Tony Ahn (talk) 15:48, 19 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi I'm Tony Ahn. Wikipedia is a fact based encyclopaedia. Let me know when you have more reliable and scientifically based sources, such as medical journals. Thank-you David.moreno72 15:55, 19 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Hi User:David.moreno72, I'm a psychotherapist myself, and I'm here to tell you that theoretical orientations and psychotherapeutic treatments generally don't proceed from research to practice as if they were pharmaceuticals or surgical techniques, which means they won't be found in medical journals. A very small proportion of psychotherapeutic treatments (called Empirically Validated Treatments) have efficacy research behind them, and those studies are more likely to be in the academic clinical psychology literature than medical journals. Check out the Adlerian Family Therapy , Gestalt therapy, Attachment Theory, and Object Relations Therapy. Notice how there are no sources from medical journals in those articles? Notice also how the sources that do exist are primarily practice manuals and not academic research on efficacy of technique? I've now provided five hard news sources (Le Matin, The Times of London, The Telegraph UK, ABC News, Grupo Globo) from four different countries, which clearly satisfies WP:RS. I'm Tony Ahn (talk) 19:23, 19 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Hi I'm Tony Ahn . I would suggest that you read WP:MEDRS. The sources that you have provided clearly don't qualify as medical reliable sources. Thank-you. David.moreno72 02:09, 20 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

16:11:02, 19 September 2016 review of submission by RuleOfThirds

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David, 1. A mathematical formula does not need a source ... it just is a fact on it's own and I am not creating an article about the formula itself but it's effects in a particular field.

2. This mathematical formula proves mathematically that 1 third of x numbers probably won't appear and is applicable to the roulette wheel

3. If you are refering to the not enough sources being 'most roulette players', then I can include hundereds of links from roulette system websites where they have articles concerning the Rule Of Thirds, but none of them explain why this 'Rule' occurs. Hence there is no source available rather the opposite, which makes it logical for my article to exist.

4. I cannot get any further sources because I am the first person to attempt show the connection between the probability formula and the actual occurance on a roulette wheel. Not an invention or dicovery, but just a point which milions of roulette players are missing.

5. And if I cannot present the required sources, can you present the opposite ...that there are existing soruces concerning this concept ?

6. Last but not least, what qualifications or knowledge do you have, or what research have you or this system's algorithm undertaken to decide or evaluate that there are sources anywhere which I should be refering to ?

Pete

@RuleOfThirds: One of the fundamental principles of Wikipedia is that 'Encyclopedic content must be verifiable'. Of course if you wish to disregard the policies of Wikipedia, you are of course free to create your own website or blog where you won't be bound by the policies of Wikipedia. On the other hand, if you wish to create a Wikipedia article, you must provide reliable sources. Perhaps a scientific article in a mathematics journal. Thank-you David.moreno72 16:43, 19 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

02:31:51, 20 September 2016 review of submission by Beauty111

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What lines specifically require footnotes?

Request on 15:21:26, 20 September 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by Jhureley1977

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Hi User:David.moreno72, This is about Article about - Sunder Prasad. Thanks for the review comments. I have removed the 2 links deemed irrelevant / not notable. I added those as the books with references are with me as hard copy (added them in the reference section). I don't know how to cite the books as references for a particular point. Thanks and regards, Ashutosh


Jhureley1977 (talk) 15:21, 20 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Buck (HW) Crowley

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Hello David, how are you? Well this is interesting. I challenge you to think rather than react.

You Said: "... do not adequately show the notability ... significant ... reliable sources ... independent ... verifiable"

The Wiki submission is: "Buck (HW) Crowley] has been awarded 75+ US patents. The 75+ US patents [1] (100's world wide) Patents are the government declaring this person an "inventor" having produce "novel and unique" contribution to the art and science in the related field."

The US patent process takes typically 2 years, majority of patent applications are rejected and are subject to great scrutiny from independent experts. The results of the application and the patents are published by many independent, reliable, and verifiable sources.

The US government declares this person an "inventor" having produce "novel and unique" contribution to the art and science in the related field.

To get a US patent is most significant. To get more than 75 US patents is very notable, very few people are this distinguished.

Patents are: "notable, significant, reliable sourced, independent, and verifiable"

Thank You — Preceding unsigned comment added by CrowleyHistorian (talk • contribs) 15:32, 20 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi CrowleyHistorian. An article should be more than just, 'This guy has a lot of patents'. If he is notable you should be able to have more references, and more detail to the article. Thank-you David.moreno72 16:12, 20 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your opinion, but please cite the Wikipedia rule that you are referring to. THANK YOU — Preceding unsigned comment added by CrowleyHistorian (talk • contribs) 15:37, 21 September 2016 (UTC) Most important inventors who are notability and significant, don't get publicity but through patents. For example Chase Bishop, a computer scientist, designed the first Microsoft windows. Think of many industries not so well know by the popular media, like the printing industry. Notability, significant people who can be independently verifiable from reliable sources is what Wikipedia is about. When we get past this "notability (and not "depend on things such as fame, importance, or popularity") and significant"... there is plenty more references, and more detail that can be added to this very important article about a very important person. Thank You - — Preceding unsigned comment added by CrowleyHistorian (talk • contribs) 19:45, 22 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Article submission

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Regarding the messages you left on my talk page, the article in question at Draft:Jawaher bint Muhammad Al Qasimi was not submitted by me, it was submitted by this new editor. I just cleaned it up a little. Please send your messages to that editor regarding the status of their article submission. Thank you very much!  Paine  u/c 19:10, 20 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

16:30:29, 21 September 2016 review of submission by Nosrevi

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Good Afternoon David, currently researching this individual, source known attached thank you for the edit

09:43:44, 23 September 2016 review of submission by 212.250.168.78

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S. Michael Hudson again

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David – Mr. Hudson forwarded me the content of the email you sent 9-23 , but neither of us can find any response to the material I sent on the research for cites. Are these appropriate? Should I incorporate them into the text and note that any search should include the three forms for his given name? I apologize for the trouble, but I don’t seem to understand the format for communication. Thanks. KIForline 9/24/16 2602:304:CDBA:4400:49A0:BB93:2631:4887 (talk) 15:26, 24 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi 2602:304:CDBA:4400:49A0:BB93:2631:4887. First, it would be best if you create an account. Second, I don't envisage the page being accepted as the subject does not pass the general notability requirements. Basically, Wikipedia only accepts biographies for famous and well known people, who have numerous 3rd party sources. The Hudson page is basically an autobiography, which Wikipedia frowns upon. If Mr Hudson deserves having a page, someone else would create it. I have already said to read WP:AB, but it seems that it needs to be repeated again!!!. If Mr. Hudson is really desperate to have his autobiography on the internet, may I suggest that he create his own blog or website. There are plenty of options available. Just Google 'create free blog'. That way he won't be encumbered with Wikipedia policies. Thank-you David.moreno72 16:06, 24 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
David - Thanks I will so advise. KIForline 9/25/16 2602:304:CDBA:4400:1439:CB85:B08:E07A (talk) 11:42, 25 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Geordie Selwyn

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Hi David - why have you rejected my article about Geordie Selwyn? I clearly stated that he is a fictional character. NB I have now deleted any references to real people. Hils x — Preceding unsigned comment added by Metalhobbit (talk • contribs) 16:58, 24 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Metalhobbit. The reason was 'This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.' May I suggest that you read WP:REFB so you understand what is required. Thank-you David.moreno72 17:01, 24 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

23:40:32, 24 September 2016 review of submission by 5h6y7u

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Couple-ish draft page was denied on the base of not enough third party sources. They have now been added and I'd like re-review to the page.

How to get my Wikipedia Page published without official sources from reputable sources (articles, newspapers, etc.)?

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My friends and I created a team for eSport type of play. We have references each of us but I don't believe those count as actual legitimate sources like ABC News, newspapers, articles, etc. Right now if you would like to check https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:R2_(eSports). There are sources (references) but not reputable sources like I stated in my last sentence. If I do not have those official type sources, do I remake the Wikipedia Page under a different category to get accepted? Or are these sources acceptable? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 97.77.25.162 (talk) 01:03, 25 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi 97.77.25.162 There are a number of issues with the page. First, the article does not meet general notability requirements per WP:GNG. Also, since it would seem that you are associated with the team, there is a undisclosed conflict of interest per WP:COI. Given this, it does not seem likely that the page with be accepted. Thank-you. David.moreno72 02:16, 26 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Request for guidance

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Hello David, I have noted that you have deleted some details on the page I edited about Andy Preston (businessman). However, I'm not clear why and hope you can explain, as i don't want to make the same errors again. What I had written was in good faith and I believe supported with citations. Perhaps the citations i quoted were not explicit enough about what the words I had written? Any guidance would be very much appreciated. Thank you. GeorgiePorgieGirl (talk) 19:48, 25 September 2016 (UTC)GeorgiePorgieGirl[reply]

Hi GeorgiePorgieGirl. The edits were knocked back because you had made a claim that was not supported by references, and per WP:BLPSOURCES, I was forced to rollback. The claim was 'and has claimed he joined Tony Blair on stage at a Labour Conference.', which was right next to the http://www.fansonline.net/middlesbrough/article.php?id=3989 reference. In that article, I cannot find anywhere where the claim was verified. In future, if you wish to make claims in biographies of living people, as per Wikipedia policy, you must also directly reference that claim. Thank-you David.moreno72 01:18, 26 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

No warnings?

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Hi. I see you reverting vandalism but you never seem to leave a warning on the vandals Talkpages. Why not? It's the only way to get them blocked eventually. If you don't mind me asking. Yintan  12:59, 26 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Yintan. I tend to follow WP:BITE. I prefer to give the editors a chance. Of course if they do persist I will warn them, and after breaching a level 4, I do report them. Thank-you David.moreno72 13:08, 26 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Ah, I see. Thanks. Yintan  13:12, 26 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Inline refrences

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Hello, I really need your help to finish my article about Antelope Audio. Your last comment said that I have to add inline references, but I'm not sure what how to do it and what they should look like. Please help with editing the article. Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sisast (talk • contribs) 07:18, 27 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

07:29:31, 27 September 2016 review of submission by Ricardo2023

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I have made the requested updates and corrections. Many thanks

15:03:22, 27 September 2016 review of submission by ROBOJOBOmusicvideo

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Hello David,

What can I do to improve my article and re-submit it for approval?

Thanks! Jonesy ROBO JOBO Music Video ROBOJOBOmusicvideo (talk) 15:03, 27 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi ROBOJOBOmusicvideo. Wait for someone else to create it. You have a conflict of interest. Thanks David.moreno72 15:04, 27 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Article Creation Darius van Driel (reverted)

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Apologies, Dave, this was my first attempt at article creation, still much to learn :( Several external refs / citations now added with some small textual changes. Greetings, Bryannl

Request on 08:42:55, 28 September 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by 2602:306:330B:6920:889F:2CFB:F1E1:2665

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it says I am not meeting the requirements for the incline citation. I know my site and information are correct, so I'm guessing I am just formatting it wrong. I am new to wikipedia, can I get more assistance with creating this page? 2602:306:330B:6920:889F:2CFB:F1E1:2665 (talk) 08:42, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi 2602:306:330B:6920:889F:2CFB:F1E1:2665. Please read WP:REFB. Thank-you David.moreno72 08:45, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 13:10:04, 28 September 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by Vincent L Gilbert

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Vincent L Gilbert (talk) 13:10, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Vincent L Gilbert. Your article fails with WP:PROMO, WP:AB and WP:COISELF. It is very doubtful that it will be accepted. Thank-you David.moreno72 15:14, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Grant Community High School

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I am just wondering why you deleted my edit on the Grant Community High School page. I am learning about editing Wikipedia pages for a course assignment and am just wondering what I may have done wrong.

Thanks. Cdeels (talk) 02:27, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Cdeels. You claimed that Shaina Turley attended Grant Community High School, but the reference you supplied said that she attended Fox Lake Grant. They need to be a precise match. Also, without having a Wikipedia article, or a 3rd party reference, the individual is not considered notable. Thank-you David.moreno72 02:50, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Ok. Thanks. When the high school is listed by the state of Illinois for sports purposes it is listed as Fox Lake, Grant. Not sure why, but that is how it has been done. Cdeels (talk) 03:03, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

wings to fame

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I saw you edited wings to fame and marked for deletion by removing text in it ? any reason for same . Can u undo it — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aggarwalyogeshnew (talk • contribs) 11:20, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Aggarwalyogeshnew . Blatant copyright violations and promotions are not permitted on Wikipedia. Please do not remove the notice. Thank-you David.moreno72 11:42, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Anngelo

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See my ANI post just now about this editor. Doug Weller talk 14:55, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Some stroopwafels for you!

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Hello! You flagged 'First Aid tab'. Thank you.

I wrote on the page that I would like it to be deleted. I have made my own wiki on Miraheze. In order to get infoboxes, I must process it through Wikipedia. I hope that you understand. Is there an alternative way to get infoboxes? Gitonga (talk) 05:37, 30 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi

Thanks for your message about reviewing..

I would like to know if you have reverted the whole edit or just the part containing the link to the training department?

Thank you — Preceding unsigned comment added by SJMaliyekkal (talk • contribs) 05:57, 30 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

16:55:08, 30 September 2016 review of submission by Landoflizards

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How many newspapers and independent blogs do i have to submit? This is a book written by a public offical that hasn't offically released yet. Come Monday of next week it will be very widely covered.

deletion page Chiesa della Santissima Trinità (Alcamo)

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Hi, this page was published on 23rd August 2016: I have pictures and information still to put inside. Moreover, I think there are information useful to people. When I published it on Facebook there were many likes!

What are we going to earn by deleting it? Give me some suggestion please; I like to work with Wikipedia, but sometimes I get a bit dispponted after doing certain works. However, regards. Pugliesig (talk) 17:05, 30 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Pugliesig. According to the edit history it was you who deleted the content of the redirect, and per WP:A3 or WP:G7, it is to be deleted. Thank-you David.moreno72 17:13, 30 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, you are right. There is another page, I misunderstood your action. Thank you and have my apologies. Bye.Pugliesig (talk) 17:21, 30 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

re your no-reply email: but the page you shown only covered "Fantasy Life" and did not cover the new game "Fantasy Life 2" which is coming later this year.

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re your no-reply email: but the page you shown only covered "Fantasy Life" and did not cover the new game "Fantasy Life 2" which is coming later this year. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 210.6.196.184 (talk) 08:32, 1 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi 210.6.196.184. A number of points. First, you should create an account. Second, I haven't received any wikipedia emails. I suspect that you may have me confused with someone else. And three, an article about an upcoming game would fall under WP:BALL and so would be deleted. Thank-you David.moreno72 08:51, 1 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

David - I apologize for bothering you again but I’m trying to get references for S. Michael Hudson before trying to draft a biographical article. If I use the Find sources: books for S. Michael Hudson or Mike Hudson I get no results, but if I add Aviation, Rolls-Royce or Allison at the end of this name I find several sources. If I search HighBeam for S. Michael Hudson with Rolls-Royce added I find several sources also. For images I searched S. Michael Hudson Aeronautics in Google Images and found a picture. If an associative word is required, will any of this suffice for notability? Thanks. – kiforline 10/1/16 2602:304:CDBA:4400:A514:6F04:3503:F202 (talk) 14:56, 1 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

What Wikipedia Is Not declines

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I have seen some drafts that you declined with a selection of What Wikipedia Is Not. While I agree, would it be possible to cite some specific category of what Wikipedia is not, or some reason why it is not suitable for Wikipedia? They often get resubmitted anyway and I will wind up declining them again anyway. Robert McClenon (talk) 21:58, 1 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi David, Thanks for the tip about creating the citations. I wasn't sure how I was going to cite it but upon looking at footnotes, I got the idea. I have added the appropriate citations and referenced them in the sections as seen fit. Please review and provide your feedback.

Thanks Suryan Ramamurthy — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sriramjairamjaijairam (talk • contribs) 14:15, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 14:26:09, 3 October 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by MikeW1981

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Please tell me whats wrong exactly, so i can change it ! Thx alot.

>>https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MikeW1981/sandbox/Mike_Wornath,_Songwriter_and_Composer<-------

Mike W 14:26, 3 October 2016 (UTC) Mike W 14:26, 3 October 2016 (UTC)

Hi @MikeW1981: I'm sorry but Wikipedia does not accept autobiographies. Thank-you David.moreno72 01:20, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Fiamma_Montezemolo draft page

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I'm familiar with Wikipedia in Italian, so I have some difficulties to get the differences in guidelines, especially when it comes to external links and references [are used often in a very different way, in other languages]... can you help me to complete this page properly, or at least give me some practical examples? thank you!Cristi4nov4lli (talk) 17:37, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Cristi4nov4lli. I have removed the external links for you. Your welcome. David.moreno72 01:31, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Medical_Trust_Hospital

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I saw your message that there was a copyright violation in the previous edit. Removing it was the most funniest decision you could implement. Sharing the details of an organisation from its official web page for the purpose of describing what the organisation does is defined as copyright violation. Can't have more sillier definition for copyright or plagiarism.

Thank you Very Much

Keep up the GOOD WORK — Preceding unsigned comment added by SJMaliyekkal (talk • contribs) 08:13, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi SJMaliyekkal. You seem to have confused me for someone else. It was an administrator, User: Diannaa, who flagged your contributions as being a copyright violation. I suggest that you take your disrespectful comments to them. Also, you seem unfamiliar with what constitutes a copyright violation. For your reference, if one copies and pastes copyrighted text, it is a copyright violation, and copyright violations are taken very seriously at Wikipedia. If you require further information you can read WP:CV and WP:SPCP. Happy reading. David.moreno72 08:45, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Recent Edit

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I am sorry if the edit description did not appear. I have added that "Basic information about the organisation is updated" as a minor edit.

And there were no cpyright content included as everything were typed by me..

If possible, please bring it back on..

I am sorry that I find it a tiresome task to be genuine

Thank you for understanding — Preceding unsigned comment added by SJMaliyekkal (talk • contribs) 11:33, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Jack Michael Meakin

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This article is nothing to do with me.Rathfelder (talk) 14:46, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Rathfelder. Yeah, it's a bug in the AFC script. It sends the message to the editor who last touched the page, and not it's creator. Thanks. David.moreno72 14:49, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi David,

Thanks for your response. As far notability criteria, medaling at an event such as the Pan Am games or the Commonwealth Games can and is considered as notable on Wikipedia. Greg Medaled at the 2011 Pan Am Games held in Guadalajara. Another achievement that can be considered notable is his recognition by the ITF (tennis's major governing body) as their ITF Play of the Month. Greg was also ranked #269 in the world which borderlines another criteria of being ranked in the top 200 in the world in singles. I hope this will help as Greg is someone with many achievements that many notable tennis players recognize as impressive and worthy of being recognized. Thanks for your time. All the best. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sports0516 (talk • contribs) 00:19, 5 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

draft:CLANDESTINE CULTURE , need your help at this time.

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Hi David , today the draft:CLANDESTINE CULTURE was revised by the editor Submission declined on 5 October 2016 by Robert McClenon the text wrote was( Is the artist named Poska, or Clandestine Culture?, ) I was confused because when I edited the article I didn't wrote the name Poska....someone did it ...so doing my best I deleted the name poska.in hope the article will work...but I don't know if I am doing ok with this...so please I need your help ,when you have a chance , if you can take a look to the article and let me know what do I have to do ....thank you for your time.....have i good day.. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2602:306:8BC2:B00:F83A:7095:9967:B675 (talk) 21:02, 5 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi David,

Greg was recently recognized internationally concerning thoughts he put out regarding the sport of tennis and its development. There were many articles published recently. Here are a few of them.

https://translate.google.com/translate?hl=en&sl=it&u=http://www.tenniscircus.com/circuito-atp/ouellette-difende-lorenzi-merita-piu-rispetto/&prev=search

https://translate.google.com/translate?hl=en&sl=it&u=http://www.livetennis.it/post/251242/greg-ouellette-in-difesa-di-paolo-lorenzi/&prev=search

https://translate.google.com/translate?hl=en&sl=it&u=http://sportivissimo.me/news/tennis/greg-ouellette-difesa-paolo-lorenzi_2803059&prev=search

https://translate.google.com/translate?hl=en&sl=it&u=http://www.tennisworlditalia.com/news/news/Brevi/42908/greg-ouellette-portate-rispetto-per-lorenzi-critiche-verso-di-lui-danneggiano-il-tennis-/&prev=search — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sports0516 (talk • contribs) 03:10, 6 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi David,

Greg was recently recognized internationally concerning thoughts he put out regarding the sport of tennis and its development. There were many articles published recently. Here are a few of them.

https://translate.google.com/translate?hl=en&sl=it&u=http://www.tenniscircus.com/circuito-atp/ouellette-difende-lorenzi-merita-piu-rispetto/&prev=search

https://translate.google.com/translate?hl=en&sl=it&u=http://www.livetennis.it/post/251242/greg-ouellette-in-difesa-di-paolo-lorenzi/&prev=search

https://translate.google.com/translate?hl=en&sl=it&u=http://sportivissimo.me/news/tennis/greg-ouellette-difesa-paolo-lorenzi_2803059&prev=search

https://translate.google.com/translate?hl=en&sl=it&u=http://www.tennisworlditalia.com/news/news/Brevi/42908/greg-ouellette-portate-rispetto-per-lorenzi-critiche-verso-di-lui-danneggiano-il-tennis-/&prev=search (Sports0516 (talk) 03:18, 6 October 2016 (UTC))[reply]

Draft:Brothers Moving

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Dear David.moreno72.

You are declining an article about the band Brothers Moving. (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Brothers_Moving). The reason being that the article is missing notable and reliable sources. The citations includes Rolling Stone Magazine, 9GAG TV, and Panta Magazine + Book A Street Artist (which are both the biggest street art medias in Germany). Everything that is mentioned in the article has been covered by major independent sources. Wiki need an article about this artist. Please reconsider. Thank you for taking your time reading this, and please let me (or others) know how to improve the article if needed.

Kasper. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 89.186.181.121 (talk) 14:48, 6 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

request for helpJoerg Helbig (talk) 15:58, 7 October 2016 (UTC)

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Hi, I tried to update the Wiki entry for Play the Game (2015). I am the movie's director. Since my updates were rejected, I looked at the guidelines and deleted all external links. But I don't understand why some links (e.g. IMDb and Austrian Film Festival) were rejected. Could you please help me how to improve my article? Thank you very much in advance. Joerg Helbig (talk) 15:58, 7 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Joerg Helbig. As per WP:COI and WP:PROMO, I would strongly advise that you do not edit that page. You have already shown a blatant disregard for Wikipedia's policies, and you are straying into WP:3RR territory, which can also result in an edit block. There are hundreds of thousands of other pages that you do not have a COI, so I advise that you edit those. Thank-you David.moreno72 16:09, 7 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I don't understand why my updated not accepted.

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Village Council Presidents The following is the list village council presidents of Ralpel Village till today: Sl/No Name Clans From To 1. Satlunga Hlawncheu 1893 1926 2. Lenghmunga -do- 1926 1939 3. Thangchhuma -do- 1939 1948 4. Phircheua -do- 1948 1954 5. Ramhnina Hrengsa 1954 1966 6. Mangduma Hlawncheu 1966 1971 7. Rualkama Hnamler 1971 1974 8. Hrangkhuma Ramlawt 1974 1978 9. Rualkama Hnamler 1978 1981 10. Nawltlinga Hlawncheu 1981 1988 11. Hrangvea Bawitlung 1988 1994 12. Tluangala Tlanglian 1994 2005 13. Lalrema Hlawncheu 2005 2006 14. Nawltlinga -do- 2006 90 days 15. Thazoa -do- 2006 90 days 16. Khawvelthanga Bawihtlung 2006 2008 17. Sangchhina Zathang 2008 2010 18. Tluangal Tlanglian 2010 2013 19. Sangchhina Zathang 2014 20. Sanguka Hrengsa 2015 21. Biaktluanga Hlawncheu 2016 till today Transportation Zeepable road leading to Lungler village was started to construct in 1996 and was finished in 2010. For the first time in the history of Ralpel, a jeep reached Ralpel village in 2010. Tluangal, the then President of the Village Council contributed Ks 100000/- to make it possible. The construction work on the jeepable road to the Tiau-River was started in 2013, but the construction improved slowly and still under development. Education The first Primary School was established in the village in 1944. The government of Burma affiliated the school in 1968. The first Middle school was established in 1980. Only one student name Laltanpuia (now Dr. Laltanpuia) could follow higher education. The middle school was discontinued due to lack of teachers and poverty. However the middle school was re-established in 1994 by the then Village President Tluangala with the help of the financial contribution from parents. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ralpel (talk • contribs) 09:54, 9 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Ralpel. Your edits were reverted because you did not provide a reliable source. You either used Wikipedia itself, which is not permitted, or did not provide a source at all. Thank-you David.moreno72 09:58, 9 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Can't we write without any resource at all?

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David, can we write without any resource at all? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ralpel (talk • contribs) 10:21, 9 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

One of the pillars of Wikipedia is that information is verifiable. See WP:5P2. Otherwise, it would contain all sorts of junk. You wouldn't want that now would you? Thank-you David.moreno72 10:26, 9 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Request to check my edit

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David, can you check my edits? I was born in the village and I have the village recorded history (hand written) with me. There are no other sources in the internet that mention about my village except its geographical position. Could you provide me the better ways to improve my contents.

Thanks. Ralpel — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ralpel (talk • contribs) 10:43, 9 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Ralpel. I reviewed your edits and they were unsatisfactory. It is clear that you don't have the competence to edit Wikipedia. If you continue to add unsourced or improperly sourced material it is likely that you will be blocked from editing, and we wouldn't want that to occur now do we. Thank-you David.moreno72 11:09, 9 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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13:36:41, 9 October 2016 review of submission by LombiKadzka

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Most of the sources are reliable, please review draft again.(also added more sources)

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