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Your submission at Articles for creation: William R. Pape (March 17)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

This submission is not suitable for Wikipedia. Please read 'What Wikipedia is not' for more information.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Onel5969 ^{TT me} 13:55, 17 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Daveshowey, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Onel5969 ^{TT me} 13:55, 17 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: William R. Pape (March 19)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.

The comment they left was:

peacock language such as "A popular author and columnist, Will Pape was a pioneer and thought-leader in the concept of the virtual office" in the voice of Wikipedia is promotional and is not permitted. This draft has not been substantially improved since its last submission. If you need help in making the case for notability, ask for help at the Teahouse.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:William R. Pape and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk or on the reviewer's talk page.
You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Robert McClenon (talk) 04:13, 19 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:William R. Pape has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:William R. Pape. Thanks! SwisterTwister talk 06:24, 19 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]