User talk:Chis Maxwell

Your submission at Articles for creation: James Chisholm (Senior) (November 27)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability—see the guidelines on the notability of people and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing, so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia.
What you can do: Add citations (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners) to secondary reliable sources that are entirely independent of the subject.

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SwisterTwister talk 19:04, 27 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:James Chisholm (Senior) has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:James Chisholm (Senior). Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 20:46, 10 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: James Chisholm (Senior) (December 24)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Onel5969 ^{TT me} 16:48, 24 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Chis Maxwell, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Onel5969 ^{TT me} 16:48, 24 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: James Chisholm (Senior) has been accepted

James Chisholm (Senior), which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
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Graeme Bartlett (talk) 21:05, 2 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Chisholm

Hello, repeating comment added on Jenks' talk page: -- I moved it- the bit in brackets is simply a disambiguation for people with the same name, and not a big deal. Senior is a term we rarely use, Junior is dabbed as (politician). (merchant), (pastoralist) would be fine. (Australian pioneer) may be better but we don't seem to use that one. I second the compliments above, clearly you are family but you have managed to avoid all the associated pitfalls and write a very respectable article Epistemos (talk) 10:52, 4 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for he clarification. My preference would be James Chisholm (Merchant). With thanks Chis 58.111.140.55 (talk) 10:54, 4 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]