User talk:Chemistry Pink Lady/Carolyn R. Bertozzi
I think that the editor is on the right track with the Wikipedia article of Carolyn R. Bertozzi. There is a bibliography box at the top of the page. I do not know if this is a formatting issue or not, but I think that the article should have this box on the top right side of the page. It should include a photo of Carolyn R. Bertozzi. This box will help people find Carolyn's important information. I like the strong lead that the article has because it is concise and to the point of why she is important. There are two content boxes or sections. I recommend that the article just includes one of these instead of two. I would recommend that an editor fact checks that she got an A.B. in chemistry. I have never heard anyone getting an A.B.. I think it is suppose to be B.A. I just want to make sure that it is correct. I would recommend that the editor adds significant papers, books, and publications. This section is currently blank and needs some support to make it complete. I would recommend that the editor adds a bibliography or reference section so that the reader can easily access the citations. I like the external video, but I would recommend that the editor integrates it into the research section of the article. Also, the addition of photos of her research or relating to her research would help make this article complete. I love where this article is heading. I would recommend that the editor reviews the grammar and structure of the article to ensure that it is the best that it can be. Keep up the hard work!Guacamole21 (talk) 00:06, 28 January 2020 (UTC)
Carolyn R. Bertozzi Sandbox Review
[edit]Hi Chemistry Pink Lady! I have peer reviewed your article on Carolyn R. Bertozzi. Overall, great start! I look forward to seeing how you continue to develop this article. --Cation2020 (talk)