User talk:CatCas96/sandbox
I think your page could benefit from defining a few terms such as Phallic Baton or classicist or possibly creating a link to these pages. I think you could expand and discuss about condoms too and how those were prevalent long ago too. I think you should use multiple sources too not just one. Using only one source results in an unbalanced or biased article. Also your page should include more citations like after you discuss ritual purposes or after human sexuality. I also think you digress to much from the subject when you mention the cult of the God Osiris. Also doesn't Eurasia include Pakistan, that was just a bit confusing for me. Other than these minor issues your page is solid. Your article is well focused and informational. It's quite insightful that you discuss many different regions from Eurasia, Pakistan, Ancient Greece, to Egypt.
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