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Article evaluation

Link to Article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lacrosse_stick

My first observation is that I don't think enough thought was put into fully explaining the history and the native american's creation of the first wooden lacrosse sticks that are very often called "traditional sticks". Even though a lot of the information in this first section of the article is correct, I feel like there is still some room for improvement

There should be a link to the patent that is being referred to at the start of the contemporary lacrosse stick paragraph

The article jumps right into discussing the rules and regulations of the heads, but doesn't really have a diagram that displays them. This could make it very confusing for newcomers to the sport

This article is very bias towards mens lacrosse, and I really think it should have two separate categories since men's and women's lacrosse are very different sports that use very different lacrosse sticks

My comment that I will enter is as follows " Since there has been a lot of useful time spent explaining the functions of a men's lacrosse stick and its NCAA regulations, should be make a separate subheading for contemporary women's lacrosse heads so that just as much information can be given for a girl's lacrosse stick as it is given for a boys lacrosse stick"