User talk:Bryantkale/Article evaluation

Since it’s impossible to see what you’ve already added, I’ll just start by saying, since it’s such a short article, I’m sure every little bit helps. It looks like she has 6 books, and you could add the other book to the list. Adding a picture sounds like a great idea, but make sure the image is public domain (the one from Skeena Reece’s performance was removed because permission wasn’t given to use the image, so be aware that that might happen.) From the poetry foundation I found this --

“Howe’s scholarly articles have appeared in Pre-removal Choctaw History: Exploring New Paths (2008), Reasoning Together: The Native Critics Collective (2008), and Foundations of First Peoples’ Sovereignty: History, Culture, and Education (2008).” I feel like these might deserve a section in Howe’s article or might even be a helpful place to get more information to add on her. I would double check with Prof. Shook first though to see if they’re okay/accessible.

“She was the narrator and host of the 2006 PBS documentary Indian Country Diaries: Spiral of Fire.” → this movie is not listed in her ‘films’ section. Maybe it should be? Or noted elsewhere on the page?

I think that you mentioned in your sandbox that you wanted more bio on her to be included in the page, and since you’ve been doing the research, you probably know better than I do what sources you plan to use for it. If you get stuck with sources, search for interviews is good, but also search specifically for her specific plays/books/film might be interesting. You might get articles about how they were received in certain places that wouldn’t pop up with just a search with her name.

I hope none of this is redundant, but I’m certain some of it is. Hopefully it was at least somewhat helpful. Trying summarizing a bit more and rearranging the order of material that you source so it doesn’t get flagged as too close to the original. I’m sure you wrote decent stuff, but since I can’t see it, this is the best I can do. MadamePirateOwl (talk) 00:25, 5 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]